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You promised me forever
Well that was just a lie
You promised me the world 
But then you said goodbye 

You promised me you’d never cheat 
You lying b*****d 
You promised that you’d always stay true 
That was obviously too hard for you 

You promised you never fancied her
That I was your number one 
You promised to always be there 
But now your f*****g gone 

You swore you’d never hurt me 
You lying little p***k 
You swore we’d always be together 
But I guess you only thought about your d**k 

You told me you didn’t like her 
Until they two fateful nights 
When you went away with her 
And seemed to fly out of my sights 

I promised you everything 
And I gave it my all 
But you took that away from me
And left me feeling small

I promised you that I’d always be true 
And that I’d never break your heart
I promised you my world 
But then you tore it apart 

I swore that I loved you 
That you were my number one 
I swore that I needed you 
But just like that, we were done 

I swore I only had eyes for you 
But you didn’t care
You only thought about yourself 
And that bitch standing there 

So now you think that I care 
Well hun things aren’t that bad 
It’s not like you ever were or you’ll ever be 
The worlds greatest lad 

So don’t think you’ve really broke my heart 
By going with that dirty hoe 
In fact you did me a favour
I’m glad I’ve let you go 

So this is the end of your stupid game 
And yes I’ve had some fun 
I now have someone special 
Who I know is the one 

It’s not like you were even good in bed 
You were just a guy 
That I used to love, but now I hate 
And now hun it’s my turn to say goodbye.

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  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 10, 2011

    If I were a boy then you will know the meaning of disappointment

  • arielcnacion on Apr 16, 2011

    full of emotions.. thi s poem could surely capture hearts. (P.S. please edit
    “You promised that you’d always stay true
    That was obviously to hard for you” “too hard”) =)
    It would make this article almost perfect, =) keep on sharing darlene. =)

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