From sweet to sour.simple as that.

you were the apple of my eye
the sun that lit my sky
the music that filled my lungs
the bullets in my gun

and then my eyes went sore
the sky fell & hit the floor
the music turned to cries
and my ammo ran dry

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  • Kip Spleen on Oct 28, 2009

    I dig the underlying form, which DOES turn from sweet to sour… It sort of shimmers on the edge.

  • diamondpoet on Oct 28, 2009

    Wow that was deep.

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