A Young Angel wants to be on his own.

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The young angel’s wings had mended,

sitting in the garden

which was well tended,

but clearly at the end

of the season,

there was a slight

chill in the air,

the young angel had a clear sight,

no fear,

no fright,

God helped out,

it was God’s will,

and his right,

but the young angel wanted to do

everything on his own,

including battling the dark,

who had teeth like a shark,

he wanted to fight his own battles,

then the demons slipped

through the neatly trimmed

bushes and plants,

a light dimmed,

evil eyes that slant,

the young angel was trapped,

but not for long,

other angels stuck close to a tree,

battled the demons,

and set the young angel free.

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Comments (4)
  • raman13 on Aug 26, 2009

    Good Stuff

    Keep it up

    Best Regards

  • Netty net on Aug 27, 2009

    I like how you have a picture then you have story of young angle.

  • alc on Aug 27, 2009

    Great read!! Very enjoyabe!

  • Evelyn M Carter on Aug 31, 2009

    Ah, wow, I really liked this one a lot Frank. Really nice! Thanks for sharing! :)

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