When you want someone desperatly It’s amazing how you can watch someone do something yet, won’t take your advice. When you know better. In the end they’ll have to learn the hard way.

 

I am young, naïve, innocent

Unpolished in the game of love

You tell a lie, I believe

Not used to nitpicking, cunning behavior

Be cautious of my emotions

Fragile as they may be

A cruel word would disrupt me

Tender is my soul, frail to defend

Pick an opportune time to angle your motives

Moments passed to fast, addicted to your presence

It’s over before it begins, you’re gone, I’m blemished

Left in a euphoric sentiment, now tarnished

By Cynthia Aholelei © May 30, 2011

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  • kanivel on May 30, 2011

    Oh! A sad, but wonderful poem! I like it!

  • Martin Kloess on May 31, 2011

    Good search…

  • chandrra on May 31, 2011

    Good poem

  • AshleyApathy on May 31, 2011

    thanks for the share :)

  • neopisiva on Jun 2, 2011

    Very impressive!

  • realityspeaks on Jun 4, 2011

    Nice share

  • hfj on Jun 7, 2011

    Good poem. Two more words, “Birth control”…………

  • Elove Poetry on Jun 7, 2011

    wonderful words

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