Younger Girls Luk after your Self.

Listen me Girl Your Face Look Like a Moon

You are to Much Younger

You  Just Catching Butterflies

or

Playing Dolls.

You will be much  Dreaming on your Innocent Eyes

Dont shall be Read Loves Poems Loves Novels.

All Poets teaching you about Love..!

Dont Read them Poems

you dont know about Loves.

because you to Much Younger

Listen you Cant find your true love

And this World lot of Peoples Living

Some are Wild Animals Peoples

when will you see them eyes

So you things they Loves you .

But you cant read them hearts

They need Just your Body

They Playing your Body

Listen me you are to Much

Younger.

Dont Playing with Acanthus

Dont Be write some one name

on your palm..

Dont be Struggling with Poems

you will be look after your self

Dont be Singing

Dont thinking about Love

Listen Girl your face

Look Like a Moon

       And

You are to Much Younger

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  • Rosettaartist1 on May 26, 2011

    Well done my friend.

  • Dreamy777 on May 26, 2011

    nice work

  • Pooja Says on May 26, 2011

    Wonderful thought.

  • Aiyanna on May 26, 2011

    Have to say this hits the nail right to the head on the message I tried to convey to you previously on the last poem…
    Let children be children, teens be teens but under proper guidance of a mature sensible adult and you will have good law abiding citizens in hand….
    With the face of moon you have the innocence that resonates from the sun with the aims of the stars so hope to see you produce more, if you are interested in learning how to do it will guide you…
    No matter the age, as a woman or a man you should view your body as a temple of god and only let the devoted one play with it and clean it…
    Good Luck!!!

  • neha on May 27, 2011

    it kind of Advice really superb this Poem..
    im telling you girls who they are younger ages they must your poem.. then they really know how much living in this world wild animals superb work

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on May 27, 2011

    this was beautifully written

  • ravitej on May 27, 2011

    good thought.

  • KittyK on May 28, 2011

    Beautiful post you have written…

  • neopisiva on May 28, 2011

    Cool!I liked it!

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