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Your Burning Desire

LOVELYHONEY on Dec 5, 2009
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Your desire, fires within me a desire.


Your Desire

 

 

 

Your desire burns my fire

I can feel your emotions entire

Whom you yearn for

I really can’t say

But when we meet

Notes we shall display.

 

The fire hopefully will

Consume me not

And my burning desire

Wouldn’t by then

Have become, nought

 

 

    

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  • Dame Barbara on Dec 5, 2009

    How fiery!! Me like!!

  • ssaunders on Dec 6, 2009

    Hot poem you have here.

  • V rank on Dec 6, 2009

    I love the simplicity…

  • giftarist on Dec 6, 2009

    Flaming!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 6, 2009

    A vivid description. Good work.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 6, 2009

    Great poem!

  • drelayaraja on Dec 6, 2009

    Wonderful poem and flower..

  • trios2009 on Dec 6, 2009

    Intense!

  • lillyrose on Dec 6, 2009

    I like!

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  • Snuggles85 on Dec 6, 2009

    Very good i like this :)

  • LovelyWolf on Dec 7, 2009

    Yet another metaphor for fiery passion! Thanks for the share!

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