Your Criticism

R G Lowry on Nov 7, 2009

If you haven’t got anything nice to say, don’t say anything at all.

Your criticism boils the blood in my veins

I have to bite my lip and yank my reigns

to stop myself from unleashing a tirade

to match your raining on my my parade

You ask for the world and then want more

you bring all of your rubbish to my door

I try and give you everything you want and need

but you don’t give me a chance to even breathe

2
Liked it

Comments (1)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 7, 2009
criticisms r really irritating.. but we shud judge the sense which they mean.. some say the worse only for the worse n some criticise so that we can do much better.. so it depends actually…

Hi there!