Your Dreams

M A Bhanpurwala on Mar 7, 2009

Tags: guiding light, Window blind

Dreams have no control.

It’s not possible for us

To control Weather, seasons, or dust
Autumn is on its way
And brings many a rainy day.
But knowing your kind
and your presence of mind

You’ll let not either Autumn or winter

inside.

During those darkest times

Simply draw the blinds

Sleep well thru the night

Knowing

around you is bright

Your source of beauty and light

Is in your dreams

Cling to those dreams
this autumn please

Let your own guiding light

Keep this fact in sight

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Darla Smith on Mar 7, 2009
Great poem!
Alicia Wind on Mar 7, 2009
Nice!
Uma Shankari on Mar 7, 2009
We have no control over dreams, but that’s great, since they sneak in and provide us joy, nevertheless — is that what you mean?
papaleng on Mar 7, 2009
Oh that was so cute my friend. Live your dreams as they say..
maranatha on Mar 7, 2009
Very nice, especially for those who hate the winter.
Joni Keith on Mar 7, 2009
Nice thoughts.
Holly J. Harrington on Mar 7, 2009
Love poetry.
rutherfranc on Mar 7, 2009
what a beautiful message.. inspiring..
Betty Carew on Mar 7, 2009
very inspiring MA
nutuba on Mar 7, 2009
Follow your dreams … cling to them. Nicely expressed in this beautiful poem!
Susan B Anna on Mar 7, 2009
very good flow, and very well expressed.
macon on Mar 8, 2009
good work!
CutestPrincess on Mar 8, 2009
Interesting outlook. loved it….
Fresh Writing on Mar 8, 2009
I have to agree with Susan; very good flow and “very well expressed.”

-Fresh Writing
Emma J Kerry on Mar 8, 2009
I like this, it’s really inspiring.
Denise Kawaii on Mar 8, 2009
Dreams can be fun, entertaining and insightful when the world around us is drab and boring. Great poem!
Sakuragi on Mar 9, 2009
Good message in there!
nesita on Mar 9, 2009
Great poem dreams help us to live in another life.
V Frost on Mar 10, 2009
I love the metaphorical value.
BluSphere on Jul 22, 2009
beautiful poem!
Very nice
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 21, 2009
Yes, we need people like yourself to creatively remind us what life is all about.

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