A passionate poem.

I was the first of all your loves
The first to wake your heart
The one to make it beat so wild
Pierced now with Cupid’s dart

I looked your way and stole your breath
I turned a school girl’s head
You were love-struck there and then
Hung on every word I said

Perhaps you were a little young
But your heart at my feet you lay
And gladly offered me your soul
To do with as I may.

How you longed for me to want you
You was just the friend of a friend
Still you would sit and dream of us
…but dreams are just pretend

Years ago you fell for me
But for you I was never right…
And ‘though your heart may flutter still
It no longer leaps on sight

I was the first of all your loves
And so I’ll always stay
But in your heart the space I hold
Is now a corner out the way.

 

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  • Angelgirlpj on Apr 9, 2011

    I loved the poem about your first love.

  • Martin Kloess on Apr 9, 2011

    very good

  • Pearl Wilson on Apr 10, 2011

    an accurate description of first love after many years: “a corner out of the way!”

  • Oversoul on Apr 10, 2011

    Thank you all for your wonderful comment. The Oversoul shall now take a moment to reciprocate. Peace be unto y’all–even as we speak.

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