Your Gone

Collette Edwards on Aug 23, 2009

Tags: amiss, confused, drift, game, gone, pawn, poem, Poetry, scream, sea of love, search, used

Being used….

I see you in my dream,
I scream out your name.
Something is amiss here,
Nothing seems the same.
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Suddenly your gone,
I search for you all night.
I look in all your spots,
Something Just not right.
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I feel you slip away from me,
I feel you rip out my heart.
I’m lost out in the sea of love,
I feel our love drift apart.
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I don’t know what I did so wrong.
I’m feeling all confused.
Is love just a game you play?
I’m feeling oh so used.
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Suddenly I awake,
To find your really gone.
So I guess in your game of love,
I was just a pawn.

~Collette~
©Copyright 05-09-02

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AngelaDavid on Aug 23, 2009
Ah Collette. Your words call out. Even when get passed these experiences, we still sometimes wonder. We are better-off! Really! Nice write here. Thank you.
raman13 on Aug 23, 2009
Good Work

Beautifully written

Thanks
ken bultman on Aug 23, 2009
A love lost lament nicely put together is rhyme.
giftarist on Aug 23, 2009
Great job..

I like this
Mr Ghaz on Aug 23, 2009
Well done!..This was lovely and well written poem. I loved it! Thanx for sharing this great stuff.
Lady Sunshine on Aug 24, 2009
Aww Collette, still making me sad…

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