Everything you do and say carries on in some way whether you are present or not.

A part of you is everywhere,

In everything you do.

In everyone you’ve ever met,

And everyone you ever knew.

In everywhere you ever went,

And everywhere you go,

You leave a part of you behind,

To carry on and grow.

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  • Ubel Ein on Oct 24, 2010

    Very good and true. I like this!

  • drelayaraja on Oct 25, 2010

    Lovely poetry :-)

  • GodsGrace on Oct 25, 2010

    Good Poem

  • rafihan on Oct 25, 2010

    nice poem… i like it…

  • LCM Linda on Oct 25, 2010

    You’re right. Nice share.

  • CC23 on Oct 25, 2010

    nice poem. it does reflect apart of us *whether we are present or not. =)

  • awesome11 on Oct 25, 2010

    Wonderful article written

  • pschenck on Oct 25, 2010

    Thank you for the comments everyone.

  • sandcastle on Oct 25, 2010

    nice poem!

  • Kopykween on Oct 26, 2010

    short, simple and yet so sweet. Just loved it.

  • R.Laws on Oct 26, 2010

    I like it! :-)

  • LadyElena on Oct 26, 2010

    Wow, that’s deep. I’m leaving a part me here too in my comments – that wishes you well. :)

  • pschenck on Oct 27, 2010

    Again, many thanks for the comments!

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 28, 2010

    yes, I think we do leave something of an imprint in everything we do.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 28, 2010

    You are so right and put those thoughts over really well in this beautiful poem.

    Christine

  • Sharif Ishnin on Oct 30, 2010

    Positive and negative things that we do will impact things surrounding us all. Very wise words.

  • Val Mills on Oct 31, 2010

    I enjoyed reading this, nicely written

  • Jessie Will on Nov 10, 2010

    Very sound, deep poem.There is a saying, not sure how it goes exactly: no matter what you\’re reading about, what you’re writing about or what you’re talking about – it’s always about yourself.

  • Amanda Joy on Dec 4, 2010

    I believe this, too. In a very literal way we are immortal.

  • pschenck on Dec 19, 2010

    @Amanda – thanks for viewing my poetry!

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