Very Well described!!!

Wet dreams, sweet dreams. you come up with great ideas! Hats off. Liked this one too.

I think that pretty much sums up the way some men “relate” to women. Great write!

You totally out did yourself, that was beautifully executed.

very fun to read,Thank you

Interesting poem.

very interesting and the picture is too good

That was great! Laughing now.

wow.nice poem.

hahaha… I just couldn’t resist:-)

Mmmm!!! I can’t look.

Christine

I remember you well. Made the morning come faster.

interesting tease

sorry Christine x

Ken… you are naughty, the poem was about any mans fantasy not me! LOL

Miss L…Thanks for the pleasureable erotic fantasy…very visual image…no I don’t think it is just an over-active imagination…your incredible writing talents are responsible!!! Thanks.

Sorry, forgot to add this…
Edit…
“Is a sticky a sticky damp…” maybe you mean “a sticky, sticky damp” or will one “sticky” suffice??? Thanks. Me

That was real fun. Bravo Lilly!

Excellent write great flow.

Wow! Great verses. Lillyrose goes Lily Allen!

An interesting choice of subject, and a well written poem.

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Very fun and fabulous write.It is a very creative poem and another one that brought a smile to my face!!You described it all stickly lol

wow, very intense…. great, great , great poem…

I should say that you have a ” way” with your writing. The interest is kept throughout the read to see what is “coming up next”. I like that . Friend, fan, smile

Just had to pop by and what do I find….I should have known really!!! Nice one, Lily!! Hi to everyone too!

interesting….thanks for the share

Lill my darlin, you are such a tease..LOL. This was a real fun piece.

A fact of life captured in funny lines. You are a prolific writer of sorts…xxxx

Oh Lily, you have the unhappy knack of relieving men — of their dignity and secrets.

Truth in beauty

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This is the first of yours I’ve read, I think. Very well done. I’ll take a peak at your other work now.

Very good peom and funny at times and unual way of writng it.
Very clever indeed
Sincerley Lee Ness

those dont come from the heart.

Very nice piece here, excellent write!

Very interesting way of writing and very vivid in imagery.

I must say that was very unique and interesting

Hmm…solid description…

I was sweating after i read this, and the temperature is in the thirties today. Hot poem from a hot lady. Nice one.

Funny, the comments all point to a funny, witty, poem. I did not find it so at all. To me it was dark and dangerous; a warning and a call for wariness. A very well-written piece; if it is a partrait, better get rid of him before he swallows you whole.

very fun to read, loved the twist at the end

wow. now THAT wins the originality award. at least it didnt end with a cliched “but then i woke up”.

i love what remains after love has fled for the day….

Reminds me that it is not all wine and roses. Sometimes love is a messy business, and a sticky one.

Excellent! It made me smile. Loved it.

Way to go. You summed up in one poem about 90%of the human race. Great poem.

I was actually disappointed by the ending. Was expecting something darker after some of the previous dark and intense lines. Nice twist though.

The worst part is waking up. Very Nice