Comments on: Your Liquid Love

By: T. S. Lewis

T. S. Lewis — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 18:15:13 +0000

The worst part is waking up. Very Nice

By: Northernlight

Northernlight — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 22:49:59 +0000

I was actually disappointed by the ending. Was expecting something darker after some of the previous dark and intense lines. Nice twist though.

By: Theresa Johnson

Theresa Johnson — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 13:25:13 +0000

Way to go. You summed up in one poem about 90%of the human race. Great poem.

By: SheBear

SheBear — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 16:22:49 +0000

Excellent! It made me smile. Loved it.

By: A.L.Smith

A.L.Smith — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 16:42:48 +0000

Reminds me that it is not all wine and roses. Sometimes love is a messy business, and a sticky one.

By: spiritwalker

spiritwalker — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 14:50:37 +0000

i love what remains after love has fled for the day….

By: Nicholas Peterson

Nicholas Peterson — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 07:24:10 +0000

wow. now THAT wins the originality award. at least it didnt end with a cliched “but then i woke up”.

By: Sn0W1310

Sn0W1310 — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 01:54:38 +0000

very fun to read, loved the twist at the end

By: maranatha

maranatha — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 22:31:17 +0000

Funny, the comments all point to a funny, witty, poem. I did not find it so at all. To me it was dark and dangerous; a warning and a call for wariness. A very well-written piece; if it is a partrait, better get rid of him before he swallows you whole.

By: hfj

hfj — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 17:17:26 +0000

I was sweating after i read this, and the temperature is in the thirties today. Hot poem from a hot lady. Nice one.