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Upon the which i close my eyes.
In my ears echo those dreadful cries.
I lay before you in utter pain.
As though my love has gone in vain.
Another man you repeat as you break my head.
Tears of blood from my eyes are shed.
That man you speak of was no other than,
A person who stood next to me and my friend.
No relation, nothing at all.
He simply stood there to calmly wait,
for which his ride was running a little bit late.
Without a thought you pulled a gun,
My life had ended before it begun.
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