With consternation your wind of flames blew into my heart but ended up enlightening our destiny.

Your wind of flames

Swept me off my feet

I swore that you were

An angel in disguise

- – -

It happened so fast

Before I could dash off

To save myself

From your assault

- – -

Why did such a thing occur?

You became the embodiment

Of a stirring love

Within my fragile bones

That touched my heart

- – -

Yet through this helplessness

That made me so vulnerable

Your elements

Had conspired against me

- – -

It was an amazing sight

I must confess

But now this horrific fear

Astonishes me less

- – -

For now I know

The wind of flames

Was meant to enlighten

Our destiny

- – -

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  • aheed411 on Jan 13, 2012

    Very nice

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 13, 2012

    A beautifully written poem.

  • pattiann on Jan 13, 2012

    Gorgeous. I can not pick a favorote poem of yours because I love them all

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jan 13, 2012

    good .. as always

  • Eliza26 on Jan 13, 2012

    Beautiful poem!

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 13, 2012

    Nice.

  • iva75cpb on Jan 14, 2012

    Love it.

  • yes me on Jan 15, 2012

    Nice one this Erwin cheers

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