A poem about cynicism.

Now that i don’t love you

You say that you died for me.

I want you to comprehend

How much pain i felt.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Now you came with the cynicism

Saying that you love me

Like if i didn’t know

The kind of person you are.

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Because of the hypocrite that you are

Now i’ll leave you on your own

Even if i feel sorry in my soul.

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  • Emma Green on Sep 1, 2009

    Good write, thaks for the share!

  • alc on Sep 1, 2009

    Liked the path you took on this one! Thanks!

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 1, 2009

    Fabulous work! I love the subject,your words ring so true and I can easily picture this!

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 29, 2009

    Yes, but being a hypocrite is not something a person is at every moment, but rather a quality we must guard against at every moment.

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