You’re my Duct Tape

Delia Morrison on Feb 22, 2009

Tags: apple, duct tape, General, heartbreak, love, orange, pieces, poem, Poetry

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Says so much with only a few words.

I’m bordering on innocence
I haven’t got there yet

Everything is confusing these days
I couldn’t tell an apple from an orange

you’re the only thing that makes sense

If only I wasn’t already in pieces…..

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Comments (11)

revivor on Feb 22, 2009
yes!!
It makes my effort with all the reversed words and names look positively orthodox!!
http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/The-Stress-Finally-Got-to-Me.548577
Annie Hintsala on Feb 22, 2009
I like it! Good title, and its short and to the point.
postpunkpixie on Feb 22, 2009
Wow this one’s really good. I love the title, I can really relate to that.
rutherfranc on Feb 22, 2009
clever of you to use such title.. waiting for him to bring you back in piece.. good luck!
Arkaengel on Feb 22, 2009
I like it alot!
Like everyone has said the title is amazing
monica55 on Feb 22, 2009
Very nice.
Monica
Denise Kawaii on Feb 23, 2009
Short and great! I like the comparison to duct tape!
kitschkitty on Feb 25, 2009
It’s short and sweet but I love it!
Kate Smedley on Feb 27, 2009
I really really like this poem, so few words but so much said.
Chelsea A Miller on Mar 4, 2009
I love duct tape
Jacqueline Nicole on Mar 21, 2009
nice detail for having a poem of that length and I could somewhat connect with it.

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