You’re the One I Want

Alaina Ellington on Aug 7, 2008

Tags: boys, Girls, Life, love, relationship, Relationships, social, society

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On love and wanting.

Take me home.
You’re the one I want to hold.
Kiss me.
Go on, be bold.
Touch me.
Don’t be cold.
You’re the one I want.
Let’s grow old.

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Comments (5)

roberto sardelli on Aug 7, 2008
I love this one, excellent one JenysieJane. Well worded, keep it up
Lady Syxess on Aug 7, 2008
Short but effective, really good, I enjoy your poems
Heather Sidwell on Aug 10, 2008
I like it…It’s simple, uncomplicated, to the point, as well as decisive. Some of the simplest forms of art are the ones that prove classic material. Well done.
hfj on Mar 18, 2009
Nice short poem, but it said so much. Good flow and wording. Well done.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 4, 2010
THE ART OF SIMPLICITY

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