The speaker is here urging his beloved not to lose trust on him as he passionately loves her and wants to treasure her for good.

  Believe me,

 When I say that I want to be by your side,

 To hold your faithful hand,

 To treasure you in the morning and in the noon-tide,

 To be next to you in the rain or in the scorching sun,

 To be held close to your heart now and for the rest of my life span,

To comfort you,

To dry your tears and calm your most frightening fears,

To fight your battles and to shade you years after years,

Oh!!! My love, believe me, just believe me,

I will remain solely yours ever.

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Comments (15)
  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 24, 2011

    very beautiful

  • megamatt09 on Jul 24, 2011

    Very well written.

  • jaidadiz on Jul 24, 2011

    Aaah!!! that is wonderfully written, passionate….

  • aiming on Jul 24, 2011

    i love it. it is romantic

  • Eunice Tan on Jul 24, 2011

    Full of passion. Well done.

  • sqlcell on Jul 25, 2011

    good

  • yeasin on Jul 25, 2011

    thanks for ur comments.

  • M.Muzammil on Jul 25, 2011

    Excellent dear.

  • tonyleather on Jul 25, 2011

    Excellent

  • Redfiery on Jul 25, 2011

    sometimes it is really tough for us to convince someone !

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 25, 2011

    very touching,

  • Swish3 on Jul 25, 2011

    excellent poem

  • article on Jul 26, 2011

    nice poem … :) ))))

  • TracyM on Aug 31, 2011

    …beautiful poem ;)

  • stuart747 on Feb 12, 2012

    This is a very good poem,

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