About a widow who lost her husband to his hobbies.

You loved that shed; your mistress.

More time with her, than me.

Blue grey days, and starry nights

Did not tempt you away, and nor could I.

And when balloons tore at the black sky,

Burning trails of hate into the clouds,

The mother dropped her lead children, bursting 

Your heart, when hers was shattered to debris.

“No time at all,” you joked, halfway,

“I’ll build her bit by bit of every day.”

And you graced the garden all the more,

In stench of dirt-thick soil, boys and sweat .

And still the raging sky-queens soared,

With fear and passion, gunners roared.

Your wife, again she took you in,

Swallowed your soul with her wooden body.

This time the lead clouds won, stole you,

Threw flames, of love, revenge,

And burning, burning jealousy,

That smoked the air from your lungs

And piled you with orange bricks.

So here you lie, buried under her,

A hole in the garden, like you always were.

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Comments (8)
  • c m markus on Mar 16, 2009

    Beautiful poem!

  • MrZebra84 on Mar 25, 2009

    You’re fairly intriguing, if i do say so myself :)

  • Casey Kelley on Mar 26, 2009

    Amazing imagery! I absolutely loved it. Interesting and well penned!

  • rutherfranc on Mar 29, 2009

    another story is lurking behind the poem.. a more detailed one but as painful as this poem..

  • mysticdave on Apr 11, 2009

    intense, i like it:)

  • Blanca Galvan on Apr 12, 2009

    Hmmmmm….I liked it…I several interpretations floating in my head. I look forward to reading more…

  • TToni9 on Apr 13, 2009

    Reminiscent of Stephen King’s “Secret Window” with Johnny Depp.
    Where has your talent been all my life? You are awesome creative!!!!!!

  • Reilley on Apr 13, 2009

    Keep it up, you seem to be batting .1000!

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