My son is a rapper and he said mom, I dare you to try to write a rap song…here it is folks..let me know.

Walking these streets like a shadow in the night

Watchin’ your back,  fightin’  the fight

Pretty little ladies as they work their beats

Knowin’ their nothing, just trafficking meat.

I can see my home boys, travelin’ in packs

Sporting their weapons,  hiding their tracks

People all screamin’, Shots fired in the air

For this hell called life is really despair.

IS THIS EVIL PART  OF OUR CREATION

CAN’T PUT IT PAST PURE IMAGINATION

DON’T STOP NOW, WE ARE THE CREATION

OF HELL ON EARTH

HELL’S JUBILATION.

Every night, demons chase me in my head,

Only a life that’s worth living, is another shot dead

All this pain

All this sorrow

Is there gonna be a me

Tomorrow.

I can see the darkness as it penetrates my eyes

Cuz this life I am living, is a hell of lies.

No more money, no more pain

No more dying or going insane…

IS THIS EVIL PART OF OUR CREATION

CAN’T PUT IT PAST PURE IMAGINATION

DON’T STOP NOW, WE ARE THE CREATION

OF HELL ON EARTH

HELL’S JUBILATION

No more light in the darkened street

Too much  hate, too much greed

Life  Ain’t worth living when you aint got a dime

And if there ain’t no money you can’t buy time

For time is a commodity for which you seek

It eats up the hungry and feeds on the weak

This revolver in my head just showed me the way

And now I’m nobody cuz life blew me away…

Never nobody when life done blew you away.

IS THIS EVIL PART  OF OUR CREATION

CAN’T PUT IT PAST PURE IMAGINATION

DON’T STOP NOW, WE ARE THE CREATION

OF HELL ON EARTH

HELL’S JUBILATION

Now ain’t it something when your not even there

A life not worth living when your living in fear

Just go pick up the brothers and take one more ride

Through the streets of hell

A hell called life.

IS THIS EVIL PART OF OUR CREATION

CAN’T PUT IT PAST PURE IMAGINATION

DON’T STOP NOW, WE ARE THE CREATION

OF HELL ON EARTH

HELL’S JUBILATION

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  • STEVE666 on Apr 7, 2009

    This is great—love the chorus. Snoop-starrlove9-doggy-dogg.

  • starrlove9 on Apr 7, 2009

    love u steve, lol
    You always leave me such nice comments.
    So did mama win the bet with her son…lol

  • Peter Cimino on Apr 7, 2009

    Now how cool is that! I’m not one for rap music, but that was well done.

  • Sheila M on Apr 7, 2009

    Is there anything you can’t write? That was awesome. One song I’m sure he wouldn’t mind singing!

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 10, 2009

    wow… that was great.. wish to hear that song on the radio soon!

  • freaky4jay on Apr 26, 2009

    what a son can do,a mum can do better.lol

  • OhSugar on May 12, 2009

    Wow! This is cool. I love the way you supported your son. I love it.

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