For some things in life, especially those things that we can only feel inside, words are inadequate to express.

We have so many words, beautiful words.

Words like a poet’s sheep in herds.

Those descriptive things we call them words.

If we give them wings, they’ll fly like birds.

Useless though, they spiral downwards.

If the tale to tell is greater than words.

Words for us here sadly fail,

When our dictionaries’ power’s frail,

with words that in comparison pale,

to the feelings in our hearts that swell,

Description, that’s the poets grail.

Some try, and some to no avail.

To grasp the power, remove the veil,

from life and all it does entail.

For words that make emotion stale,

work much less well to tell the tale.

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  • Morgana on Dec 24, 2008

    You have joined my favorites list . Lovely poem.

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 24, 2008

    Unique poem. My tounge slip a little here and there when trying to read it out loud. I like this piece!

  • Jasin on Dec 24, 2008

    Wow! ~_~ great work.

  • tilted on Dec 24, 2008

    Very nice write/Good job!

  • Jeoffrey Meister on Dec 24, 2008

    Good 1Mind. It’s often very hard to find the words to say what you want to say. . .if I’m reading you right. . .for any person.

  • Adam Henry Sears on Dec 24, 2008

    Hi Onemind, how are you?
    I really like your poem, it’s got rhythm and a unique theme. I agree and I don’t agree… sometimes we over-express.
    Have a great Christmas.

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 25, 2008

    Very nice work – unique idea*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • lindalulu on Jan 9, 2009

    Very nice work.

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