Cheating…

The Red Flags:

Girl: Hey, your phone is off the whole day, what’s wrong?
Boy: It was on. I don’t know what happened. My account, maybe!

(Blame the telephone company)

The other day:

Girl: I left five messages on your voicemail but you didn’t call back.
Boy: I haven’t check my voicemail yet, been busy. Sorry about that.

(Keep himself busy)

Saturday Night: (On their date)

Girl: (He was late. She was looking straight into his eyes and didn’t say anything)
Boy: (He looked away) I’m sorry. My sister requested me to babysit her kids…

(Girl: When did you accept your sister’s request about babysitting? )

On Friends Gathering:

Boy:  Meet Lyza, my best-friend’s old batch-mate.
Girl:  (Aww-, okay!)

Unexpected plan:

Boy: I’ll be away for the weekend. My phone will be off.
Girl: (I can’t come, right?)

Girl: (I know)

The Break-Up:

Girl: I’m not a fool okay?
Boy: What?
Girl: Don’t bullshit me.
Boy: (Blame it on PMS) Did you just have your period?
Girl: (Annoyed) Let’s stop this. There’s no point.
Boy: Stop what?
Girl: (More annoyed) ..this relationship. (She said straight)
Boy: You don’t love me anymore?
Girl: (Pissed) Why are you pretending that you’re not seeing somebody else? (She yelled, scream at the top of her lungs)
Boy: (looked down) I was not seeing anybody. Why would I do that to you? (Deny to the max)
Girl: (Her face was too red, ready to explode. Breathe. Hands on her hips. Walking back and forth. Tears ready to shed but she controlled it)
Boy: If that’s what you want, it’s up to you.
Girl: (Got pissed… she punched his nose and leave)
Boy: Ouuch!

Three nights after, the effect of break-up made her face depressed. For five and half years they’ve been on  together for what she called perfect relationship. She felt more betrayed than being lost in love. She felt cheated than being a woman who lost her love partner. She cried at night, took a sleeping pill to be able to sleep. When she woke up, she cried again. For one week, she didn’t call anyone. She opened a book but pretended to read it, she couldn’t understand what it says. Her cheating ex called, left a message. She ignored it. Her best-friend called, messaged her, emailed and almost broke the door of her  two bedroom condominium downtown. “Open the door before I break it”. She opened it, she burst out. “Oh girl, I know…,”

Six months after….

Boy: Hey…
Girl: ( Hey, yourself..) Hi!
Boy: Can we talk?
Girl: What for?
Boy: Us
Girl: (She walked away)
Boy: (He blocked her way)
Girl: There’s no us.
Boy: I made a mistake.
Girl: Everybody does.
Boy: Please, can we talk about it.
Girl: No.
Boy: Can you give me another chance.
Girl: No.
Boy: I beg.
Girl: Beg…
Boy: Please, I’m sorry.
Girl: It doesn’t matter.
Boy: Does it mean…that…
Girl: No.
Boy: I made a mistake, I’m sorry…can we..be..?
Girl: The answer is no.
Boy: What made you become a heart of stone?
Girl: You.

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Comments (32)
  • Daisy Peasblossom on Feb 19, 2009

    The real tragedy is the women/girls who cant face up to what their guy is doing. Well made points here.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 19, 2009

    An unusual piece. I expect this happens so much to people. A great job.

    Christine

  • payge on Feb 19, 2009

    Wow!You just published most of what Ive been through in 6 months.But much better now I am glad to say.A fantastic write and it was his loss..her gain.Sadly though,things happen like this more then they should.

  • Michael Eboh on Feb 19, 2009

    Wow! That’s lovely and very good.

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 19, 2009

    awww… i really have fun reading this, it\’s like im reading a pocketbook! hehe

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 19, 2009

    I enjoyed reading this script. Thanks again!

  • Darla Smith on Feb 19, 2009

    Very interesting! I really enjoyed this.

  • papaleng on Feb 19, 2009

    this is something new, great write.. gives me an idea, I do have lots of jokes,..

  • denus on Feb 19, 2009

    interesting piece.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 19, 2009

    he heh… good girl, you stood up to the challenge.. but is that a teardrop you wiped away when he left?

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 19, 2009

    People can be so awfull, We have a long way to go.

  • QuinMonty86 on Feb 19, 2009

    You really made me feel a part of the story. The heart break. I loved the last two lines! Great stuff!!

  • Sandra A Flowers on Feb 19, 2009

    great writing, it seems ‘first cut is the deepest’ like the Sheryl Crow song goes, then after that it is always so painfully obvious,

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 19, 2009

    good work Mys, thank you

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 19, 2009

    Great job! The answer was correct right down the line. NO!

    AC

  • SJ Dickens on Feb 19, 2009

    Very nice piece. Actually I have been planning to write somethin also in a dialogue form. Now I have just seen a very good example. Thank you for the idea, apart from the wonderful content.
    Shalom.

  • Nadir on Feb 20, 2009

    Fantastic write. Sting in the tail.!

  • Amsky on Feb 20, 2009

    Nice story and ending. It should end this way.Nice conversation.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 20, 2009

    I loved the way you’ve written this – and absolutely right ending.

  • vim3 on Feb 20, 2009

    An incident that happens often, beautifully presented. Good idea:)

  • PR Mace on Feb 21, 2009

    Why must people hurt each other so much?

  • macon on Feb 21, 2009

    that was a very unusual writing but very real. it’s like i’m flipping through a true to life story.. hehe, anyway, that was quite a ‘girl power’ expressed in that piece. good job!

  • keyella on Feb 21, 2009

    Too little too late expressed so well

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 21, 2009

    Great piece!!

  • Mermush on Feb 22, 2009

    i can so find me in the girl…guys are asses…lol…
    Loved it Mys…n love ya…takecare

  • Annie Hintsala on Feb 22, 2009

    That was great! How many times does that happen a day, do you think? Good write, I like the way you put it into almost a play form.

  • egypt33 on Feb 25, 2009

    Very realistic and interesting!

  • Dee Gold on Feb 25, 2009

    nice one,mys

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 26, 2009

    Love the crispness of the lines…wonderfully written piece.

  • spiritwalker on Feb 26, 2009

    why do some people fail to admit to their fault in a failed relationshship?

  • lh on Mar 3, 2009

    ur great too good lies white lies and damned lies some lie and somely [lay]

  • Denise Kawaii on Mar 30, 2009

    Very interesting writing. The effects of an affair/cheating spread far and wide and what you have here is a great example of putting the pieces together.

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