Opening of movie type scene…A working progress.
Introduction;
Prostitute is on street corner smoking a cigarette, 20 feet away a silver BMW pulls over, with two white males. Prostitute starts to walk over slowly and confidently to the car. Heel snaps on her shoe causing her to wobble to her left, and lands on the ground. The prostitute gets up looking mortified but shrugs it off very quickly.
(Prostitute) “Hi …>takes a long drag of cigarette< ” you looking for …huh whats it called”?
(Driver) getting out car to put spare tyre on “business!” a faint laugh comes from inside the car
(prostitute) “Yeah that’s it…business…so you looking for business”?
(Driver) Not really looking at prostitute “nope got a flat tyre, had to pull over”
(passenger) passenger gets out of the car and walks around to where the driver and prostitute are standing, presenting his self in a smart, expensive suit, looks the prostitute up and down and remarks with a confident playful smile “hay I’m looking for business”
(Prostitute) Sucking her index finger “is that right? now we’re talking, and flicks cigarette butt away into gutter.
(Passenger) ” We are, I’d say 40.00 for that style”
(Prostitute) Lighting another cigarette “er OK? what is it you would like…big boy?”
(Passenger) “For you to call me” handing her a card
(Prostitute) Giving his forearm a squeeze “sorry honey no getting seriously friendly with punters but we can still have a good time now…ooh you’ve mussels under that expensive suit too!”
(passenger) Points to card in her hand then straightens his tie “sorry on way to a meeting but call me anytime, and make it soon yeah, names and contacts on front of card” gives a cheeky wink
(Prostitute) “Oh I will big boy oh I will…but only this once” flicks cigarette butt
(passenger) “Yeah I’m in business too”
(Prostitute) Pops a bubble “yeah what sort of business does one as handsome as you get up to then?
(Passenger) “yeah well I’m a cobbler”
laughs from the driver and the passenger
(Prostitute) ” Oh fuck off you creep”
More laughs fired at the wishful thinking prostitute
(Driver) standing up talking to the passenger then looking to the right in the direction of the prostitute, looking up and down then back to the passenger right well that’s the spare on. can we get going,standing here is bad for my reputation you know.”
After a minute or so prostitute stands looking at the car screeching away with the sounds of echoed laughter from inside the car fading into distance.
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