The story of a performance to remember in Paris 1803.

A Beautiful Spring Day in Paris 1803

By Brad O’Neill

                A single white cloud passes overhead, swimming through the dazzling blue sky in the inevitable moment of silence.  Through the tranquility I can hear the wind pushing the leaves as the sweet fragrance of spring blossoms attempt to penetrate the air heavy with the foul emanations of a thousand peasants gathered in the square.  The magnificent cheers rise up to quell the silence and the feeble noise of the wind is lost to the boisterous celebrations of a thousand satisfied patrons.  My performance is complete.  As the sky fades to darkness I think back over my glorious day.

                As with all of my recent days it started in relative seclusion.  I ate a wonderful breakfast of fresh fruit and sweet milk.  It is strange how a man as famous as I can eat alone for weeks at a time.  The solitude of fame is a unique endeavor, sought by all, yet I am completely alone.  I dearly miss the female companionship I have grown to love.  I have a special gift that preceded my fame.  I have a natural interest in women, and a way with the spoken word that often leads to more intimate interaction and satisfying contact.

                My assistant casually shows me the notice of my performance in the Paris Gazette.  The notice brings joy to my heart, surely, with such a glorious announcement; a thousand people will witness my exhibition.  It is a shame I cannot reach out and touch them all personally.  Through the magic of a public stage, I will enter all of their lives if only for a few precious moments.  I can only hope to leave a lasting impression.

                I am not disappointed for when I step out into the afternoon air there is a great number of people gathered for the celebration.  My escorts keep them at a safe distance.  To go over and shake a few hands would be a treat but it would of course be unsafe to do so.  The crowd grows restless as I make my way to the waiting stage.

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  • XXElleXX on Mar 27, 2010

    I’m so happy you published this Brad O’Neill ;-) This is completely unlike anything else I’ve read…a beautifully executed (no pun intended) story about a serial philandering con-artist. A beguiling story set in the spring-scented air of Paris. To call it romantic is not quite right…lust and passion with a mind-blowing finale ~ loved it! :-)

  • BullwinkleMuse on Mar 27, 2010

    Man, this is just gold, Brad. Your work is so much more polished here and, as usual, your story-telling chops are spot-on. I actually consider the purple prose as befitting the context.
    Love this passage: “There is nothing in the world like the look in a young girl’s eyes when her innocence is spilt upon my bed. The daughters of noble men are a true delicacy.” Excellent, my friend.

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 27, 2010

    I love how the main subject still thought he was important.. even as he was lead to his final scene, as you put it.

  • Katie Marie on Mar 27, 2010

    Well done my friend!! A grand performance of your art indeed.

  • James DeVere on Mar 27, 2010

    Marcel Proust would have knighted you . Magnificent . j

  • Duff D Moss on Mar 28, 2010

    I have to share Bull’s sentiments here. This is another example of your writing that makes me wonder why I bother. Great stuff.

  • kate smedley on Mar 28, 2010

    Stunning use of prose, outstandingly written, thanks to Moose for sharing your work with me.

  • hfj on Mar 30, 2010

    You took a grisly event such as a beheading, and made it into an opera on paper. I really enjoy his express tone of each young lassy he conquered, and felt guilty about my own illusions i encountered while reading this story. You really have a way to hold your audience until the very end. Well done friend.

  • David Crerand on Mar 31, 2010

    I loved your imagery. I saw the girl in my mind’s eye and heard the last breath hissing from his throat. Well done Brad.

  • Bo Russo on Apr 1, 2010

    Brad, very good stuff, I was thinking you were a vampire but then you were hissing the last breath from your lungs, this was great.

  • gjbaan on Apr 2, 2010

    A brilliant write! All of “Bastille” would have been proud of how you captivated the audience

  • RS Wing on Apr 20, 2010

    Elegant imagery as this story unfolds to a bit of decadence. Really great story Brad. France being the perfect setting for this little masterpiece. Your words lure the reader right into the arms of deaths grip. Love the ending….decapitation is always graphic and a great, final touch to this prose. Great work here.

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