Ben and I reminisce about our day,

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As the fire flickers we cuddle up for our bedtime story, A story of chasing rabbits and butterflies through the grassy English meadows of buttercups and poppies, sometimes I cant see Ben as he dashes through the long grass every now and again jumping up to see where I am. The sweet smell of the Northern marsh orchid mixed in with the yellow rattle wafts up and perfumes the air as Ben disturbs the blossoms.
We had a lovely day didnt we Ben? But the rabbits were too fast for you, are you getting old? Ben looks up at me as he snuggles in closer, he loves his Bedtime story and now its time for bed, with a yawn and a stretch Bed settles on the mat in front of the fire, I flick the light switch as I make my way up to bed nigh night Bed, see you in the morning.

 
Copyrightcopyright4..johnnydod 2010

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  • albert1jemi on Jan 12, 2011

    Nice share

  • s j tubrazy on Jan 12, 2011

    Very well written

  • krrymarie on Jan 12, 2011

    This is sweet. I love your work Johnny.
    There is a spelling mistake well two as I think you meant Ben and not bed!

  • johnnydod on Jan 12, 2011

    Thank you Kerry.. but I don,t see the typo must be me lol

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 12, 2011

    ur class Johnny

  • lucia anna on Jan 12, 2011

    interesting

  • Moneypenny on Jan 13, 2011

    short and sweet…. what a lovely image you conjure up!

  • Neva Flores on Jan 13, 2011

    Wonderful story……………

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