THIS STORY IS ABOUT AN ORPHAN KID.

A COIN IN MY POCKET

The story starts with a young boy and his family that live beside garbage mountain. His mother and father collects junks and sell it. It was a rainy Christmas Eve that time. But they have no money to buy food for “noche buena”. They only have salt and rice. Still they have a good time. “Mama, Papa, what is your gift for me?”. His parents look at each other. They give coin. “Here you go son, take care of this”. The boy is disappointed. “What could I buy from this?”. One day, a tragedy happen. While his mother and father was working the garbage mountain collapses, and they were burried alive.    Its twelve pm, the boy wonders why his parents are still not home. He has no idea what happen. Then a neighbour of him came and told the happenings. ” Your parents are dead. They die in the erosion of the garbage.  He couldnt believe what happen. He cries and cries the whole night and thinks what will happen to him. “Oh mama, oh papa. why did you leave me. what will happen to me right now?”. He spend his coin on a game. Hoping that it will double. But he fails. He leave with nothing. His only choice is to beg money from the streets. A lady in white gave him some money and asks to go with her. He go with her. The lady lives in a mansion. When they arrived in the mansion the lady asks.” Where is the coin”. The boy answers ” What coin?”. ” The one that your parents give you”. ” Why are you looking for it”. ” It is the coin of immortality, when your parents give it to you they sucrifice their immortality to you.”.”Stop fooling me”.” Look, I also have one.”.” I lose it in a game.”.” Oh my, it is also your ticket to our world, world of the immortals, there you could see your parents.”.”My parents? Oh!!!? lets get it.”.”Dont worry, close your eyes and youll see it.”.The boy closes his eyes and see it.In his pocket.The coin will never be apart from you until you sucrifice it. Inside the mansion, thers a portal. The boy inserted the coin in slot and portal opens to the other world. There he was disappointed what he sees. It was full of sorrow and pain. Theres a war between red kindom and white castle. The boys mission is to make them one. He must get the heart of each territory and make them as one. But each heart was guarded by frago, a man eating beast that can reach of 25 feet. To defeat them you need to use the coin’s power. It can be anything. Time goes by and the boy succeed and he now live with his parents happily ever after.

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