A car stopped just outside the entrance to the shopping complex. Three young well-dressed men in dark glasses stepped out of the car. One man remained in the car with the engine idling.

The blazing afternoon sun beat down relentlessly on the shopping complex. A number of shoppers could be seen in the many shops there.

A car stopped just outside the entrance to the shopping complex. Three young well-dressed men in dark glasses stepped out of the car. One man remained in the car with the engine idling.

The Three Young Men

The three young men headed straight for the goldsmith’s shop located just inside the entrance. Very swiftly one snatched the shotgun from the half-asleep guard who was sitting at the door, pointed it at the startled guard and told him to lie face down on the floor.

Immediately another young man whipped out a pistol, pointed it at the crowd in the shop and yelled, “Get down on the floor and don’t move!”

A woman screamed. In reply the man with the gun fired a shot into the ceiling and yelled, “Get down and shut up!”

As the shoppers in the shop and outside dived for the floor, the third young man ran behind the counter containing the trays of gold ornaments, took out a hammer from within his clothes and smashed the glass top of the counter.

Swiftly he emptied trays of gold rings, necklaces and other jewelers into a cloth bag. In less than a minute most the trays were empty.

A Hasty Shot

The young man then came out from behind the counter, signaled to his accomplices and soon they were sprinting out of the shopping complex. Most of the shoppers were still lying face down on the floor when the three robbers reached their car. However the manager of the goldsmith’s shop has risen from the floor and was running after the robbers with pistol in his hand.

Just as the last robber was about to board the car, the manager came up a few meters behind and took a hasty shot at him. The bullet slammed into the door missing the robber by inches. Then from within the car came a shot. The manager doubled over as the bullet hit his midriff and he dropped on his knees. Women screamed when they saw blood flowing onto the floor. The last of the robber entered the car and it took off tires screeching as the driver tried to get away as quickly as possible.

Source: www.blinn.edu/…/CIRT_updated_12-15-0815.htm

Or: http://www.blinn.edu/personnel/training/CIRT_updated_12-15-08/robbery.jpg

Source: www.nyrealestatelawblog.com/…/index.html

Or: http://www.nyrealestatelawblog.com/j0403716.jpg

Hot on Their Heels

In a moment, everything was eerily quiet. All that could be heard was the groaning of the shot manager and the purring of the air-conditioning. Then, as though coming out of a dream, a few men rushed to help the now prone manager. Someone yelled, “Call the police!” Another yelled, “Get an ambulance!” An excited chatter of voices soon filled the shopping complex.

Outside the sun beat down. The daring young robbers have made good their escape, for the time being. Soon the police would be hot on their heels.

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Comments (19)
  • A.L.Smith on May 6, 2009

    Very captivating,nicely done.

  • Phill Senters on May 6, 2009

    Really interesting Mr.G. You\’ve set the hook, when is the next installment?

  • Christine Ramsay on May 6, 2009

    I wonder if they will be caught. I do hope so.
    A good story.

    Christine

  • loveyoutodeathbu on May 6, 2009

    Victims of the economic conditions. Nice to read something a bit different, mrghaz.

  • OhSugar on May 6, 2009

    Robberies are on the rise. The law says that it is because of the bad economy. I can’t imagine how awful it would be to be caught in a robbery as a victim. My prays are with anyone who gets caught in that situation. Good article.

  • Joe Dorish on May 6, 2009

    Great piece. You should be working in Hollywood.

  • QuinMonty86 on May 6, 2009

    Nice write!! Got my attention. So….do they get caught???

  • Kate Smedley on May 6, 2009

    Captivating story … is there a part two?

  • Miss Heda on May 6, 2009

    this is so cool, i was like jumping out of my chair to read faster haha.

  • George W Whitehead on May 6, 2009

    Great work, Mr Ghaz.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 6, 2009

    Mr Ghaz, you have our attention. I’m eager to know the outcome of this story.

  • Eunice Tan on May 6, 2009

    Well said. I want to know the next story.

  • monica55 on May 6, 2009

    I hope they are caught, put behind bars, and throw away the keys.
    I’m like Kate, is it a short story?
    Monica.

  • papaleng on May 7, 2009

    friend, what happens next, are the robbers caught.. .. nice story..

  • K Kristie on May 7, 2009

    Yep, you had my attention from start to finish. Great work!

  • clay hurtubise on May 7, 2009

    Nice article. I’ve been robbed a few times, it is always tough. The last itme was by a 16 year old girl with a 9mm semi-automatic, she wanted drugs… now she is doing time.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Betty Carew on May 7, 2009

    Wow Mr ghaz what a thrilling read. Is this fiction or reality? You did an excellent job on this.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on May 12, 2009

    Wonderful story, thanks.

  • CutestPrincess on May 27, 2009

    oh, Mr. Ghaz… this is a wonderful story… i enjoyed reading this…

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