A ninety-one year man living in a seniors home receives a visit from his daughter.

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  • Debra. on Oct 11, 2009

    Moses, that gave me chills! Although eerie, it was beautiful to know that they had reunited in the afterlife. Very moving story!

  • Sourav on Oct 11, 2009

    I like this type of story. It’s really gripping! Nice write:)

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 11, 2009

    Oh, that was eerie, but I love it so much, Moses. Great story.

  • Goodselfme on Oct 11, 2009

    I think we are visited by those who have passed before us at times. TX for the well composed write!

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 11, 2009

    Moses, I enjoyed your story. The evening before my granddad died. He spoke to my dad who had died a year earlier.Granddad said he saw him standing at the foot of his bed. He kept saying, “I’m coming L.D. don’t rush me.” granddad died that night.

  • Moses Ingram on Oct 12, 2009

    Thanks everyone for your support. Thanks Ruby for sharing that story about your dad and granddad. I’m a great believer in such things.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 13, 2009

    i have heard similar stories like this…i could say it really does happen

  • GoldenAsh on Jun 24, 2011

    Touching indeed.

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