It’s nice to laugh at our deperate past experiences in the avenue of love. This is a love story which can be an obvious mark of desperation. It has no definite ending. I just had a vivid sketch in my memory. It is exactly opposite to the pace of usual love stories I’ve read. Ideal love stories have happy endings; this story is on the contrary.

 

It happened a few years ago when I was still in college I came from home on a summer vacation. No matter how dreadful this twelve-hour travel was I was so resourceful to find a bit of subject for my enjoyment. Whenever I’m on a trip, I always make sure I’m packed with books, “music gadgets”, etc.

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My final trip was on a bus. I was halfway to my destination when I recognized there were more and more college students like me rushing into the bus. However not one of them was familiar to me. I guess it wasn’t the last trip but the sun’s almost setting down. That’s probably the reason of their hurry.

I was seated on the front-most seat right next to the door. There were two doors actually. One near the driver and other was at the middle. I was near the latter. I was alone. Again the bus made another stop. The door next to me opened as if it was in a slow motion. There was a sudden rising of blood in my face. I could just feel it. Perhaps it was due to the change in pressure that caused me feel dizzy. Right through such door, a lady with a soft aura came in. I could barely notice myself breathing. I just found myself standing voluntarily at the edge of the seat. I realized myself eyeing blink-less at her. She only mouthed “Thank you.”

Now I began to enjoy this once a boring travel. I used to hate it when somebody’s hair touches my skin. But it’s different this time. I even wondered how I enjoyed every strand of her hair brushing on my face. I smelled its fragrance, which gave me some relief. I also noticed her skin was so soft and sensitive and it made me giggle while rubbing through my shoulder. I did not talk to her though I desperately wanted to. I was slacked-jawed. Words never came out through my mouth.

“Are you from MSU, too?” she started. Oh my God, she’s interested on me too! She could be the one I have been praying for. Her voice is so melodic and sweet. It felt so soothing to hear such a chime. In her tone, she must be kind. And she stressed those words very smartly but pleasantly. She must be smart. And she was smiling. She must have a pure heart.

“Yes…”, was my timid reply. My answer must have some back up details. I was from MSU but I was sure she meant the other campus. I was from MSU-IIT. When I opened my mouth to explain, an old lady walked in front of us with her head stretched high looking for vacant seats. But there was no vacant seat. I was so sure of that. With no shilly-shallying I offered to her the most precious spot I was seating on. In return, I received a kind “Thank you” and a generous “God Bless”.

I was then squatting in front of my previous seat. But I did not regret it. I had much more clearer view of the lady I was seating beside with. I was contented to smile at her. And I was even filled with so much joy when she unselfishly widened her smile to me. When I arrived at the bus stop, the more my mouth become zipped lock. I went out of the bus first among the passengers. I turned around her seat but it was empty. I looked for her at the terminal and I saw her standing at a short distance from me. She gave her farewell smile, which I thought would trigger me to at least ask her number but lightning stoke me numb. That was the last time I saw her.

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Comments (11)
  • ashan1614 on Oct 19, 2009

    I am hopeful for a happy ending to this story. :)

  • Teves on Oct 27, 2009

    Nice one…
    Pls. read my article…. http://authspot.com/poetry/heaven-37

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Oct 29, 2009

    awesome!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 2, 2009

    That was a nice love story and the pic from love story made it even more special. Thanks for sharing.

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    Really awesome ,Thanks!!!

  • alc on Nov 5, 2009

    Great write thanks for the share!

  • giftarist on Nov 6, 2009

    Enjoyed read..Thanks for sharing!

  • Starpisces on Nov 27, 2009

    nice story, I hope there is chapter 2 for this…. hope there is …

  • ladydryle on Dec 8, 2009

    nice story….I’m from MSU-IIT too…I am also hoping for a part two of this one…write another one if you’ll see her again… I know this is not just a story…(^^,)

  • jengriver on Dec 20, 2009

    Nice story, I bet you’re still thinking about her until now.:)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 2, 2010

    Practice what you’ll say when you meet her again

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