Comments on: A Girl’s Change

By: Rionel "2tet" Belen Caldo

Rionel "2tet" Belen Caldo — Wed, 27 Aug 2008 13:01:39 +0000

A composition of dream…

Best regards and keep reading,
2tet
http://www.triond.com/users/2tet

evgeny — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 15:15:23 +0000

Lord save her. She could be a genuis.

Arnold — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 15:14:32 +0000

Weird but unique. To melodramatic for me at the end.

nova — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 15:13:04 +0000

Whoever wrote this is a psycho. Suicide is against gods will.

shante — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 15:11:53 +0000

Ok I could have wrote that myself

Samantha — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 15:10:52 +0000

Unique could have been longer

Lauren — Tue, 06 Nov 2007 05:12:32 +0000

You need to make the story a little more interesting. Tell how the swan feels.

Jean — Tue, 06 Nov 2007 05:09:27 +0000

I think this is a good story. Keep up the good work.

Samantha — Tue, 06 Nov 2007 04:59:57 +0000

Its a convoluted story but it works. Keep on writing.

Rafael — Sat, 03 Nov 2007 18:09:44 +0000

Loved it keep writing