The unforgettable one.

A drop of water
Falls into
The pond below
Scattering
Tiny droplets
Rippling out
Reverberating
For miles
Upon miles
Echoing endlessly
Reaching far
Touching everything
Haunting everyone
You are
That tiny drop
Impressing upon
Affecting one and all
With your presence
You stay
In ones heart
And mind
Long after
You are gone
Oh sweet,
Unforgettable one…

Image Source

9
Liked it
Comments (18)
  • Atanacio on Feb 13, 2010

    Sunshine this was amazingly good, that one drop are you talking about the breath of God? just curious

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 13, 2010

    There is much longer in this poem, of things and a lover absent but no forgotten.

  • deep blue on Feb 13, 2010

    Well captured, tiny drop of experience reverberating with force like an inevitable course of destiny. A happy valentine’s day to you, LS.

  • VTech on Feb 13, 2010

    Nice One , Thanks For Sharing.

    http://webupon.com/search-engines/seven-ways-to-get-extra-huge-traffic

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 13, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, I too, feel a longing here. As always, you say it all so well.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Feb 14, 2010

    Intense and totally aweome. Heavy

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 14, 2010

    Nice one…

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Feb 14, 2010

    Oh Lady, what a meaningful poem of depth you have penned here for your readers to savor and cherish. The closing line is brillent for this piece as I applaud you for yet another poem of perfection by you…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • papaleng on Feb 15, 2010

    Beautiful, and such a very inspiring message embedded, what a very powerful agent is that one drop. Are you talking about the Almighty?

  • giftarist on Feb 15, 2010

    A great piece, milady. A great longing -

  • Linda Lori on Feb 16, 2010

    Beautiful poem!!

  • T. S. GARP on Feb 16, 2010

    Liked it! Spiritual meaning to it and wonderfully written.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 17, 2010

    Such a moving poem and I love the picture!

  • AlmaG on Feb 18, 2010

    I can feel this one. It made me remember someone very special.

  • standingproud on Feb 21, 2010

    Never ever for get, just lovely how you have put this Lady sun shine.
    and blow me down you have used my favourite flower the
    Bleeding heart,. :)

  • Hepsi.M on Feb 24, 2010

    I’m blown away by your poetry,I’m re-reading them..can’t help it.
    Awesome..beautiful and heart-touching words,Thanks for sharing and looking forward for more.

    Love & Regards,
    Hepsi

  • ken bultman on Mar 8, 2010

    What exquisite choice of words. Beautiful poetry…musical.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 8, 2010

    That is such a beautiful piece. lovely work.

    Christine

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading