My father rose up trembling and opened the door. He gave a sigh of relief and turned away sluggishly leaving the door wide open. He had opened to reveal the last person he had ever wished to see. In fact if Satan himself had knocked he would not have been so reluctant to see him as he was to see my drunken brother standing before him.
Bang! Bang! Bang! Continued the hard knock on the front door, as I rolled off my bed and sneaked under it. Clutching the bed spring with my two hands , I lifted my body off the floor and hung unto the bed springs until my hands refused to hold me any longer. Cold fear ran through my nerves and I lost every hope of safety.
“Our own is finished” I murmured and wept bitterly. “God, why can’t you save us?” I prayed, still clutching the bed spring.
“Open this door”. A voice from outside thundered.
“Who are you?” My father barked
“I say open this door or I will push it down”. The voice continued.
My father rose up trembling and opened the door. He gave a sigh of relief and turned away sluggishly leaving the door wide open. He had opened to reveal the last person he had ever wished to see. In fact if Satan himself had knocked he would not have been so reluctant to see him as he was to see my drunken brother standing before him.
The noise had ceased temporarily and I crept out under the bed to peep out at the staggering image that entered the house. My brother had come back. I couldn’t believe my eyes neither did I believe my ears. His voice was coarse and angry as he muttered some words and went straight to his room accompanied by a party of friends of both sexes.
“Yeah; yeah; yeah; yeah!” he sang as he switched on his stereo set. The volume was high. The walls vibrated, the windows rattled and everybody was awakened.
“Dan, lower the volume”. A mate advised.
“Shut up!! This is my room and I can do what I like in it”. He denounced.
“Your father is asleep; mark you” the friend reminded.
“You mean my young father?” he mocked.
“Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!” went the prolonged laughter of his friends as they sneered at his insanity, as if they had never seen his old father.
“My beautiful mother is sleeping” he contradicted and another prolonged laughter ensued. The music continued and the room was turned into a dancing hall. Beers were brought out and there was much merriment and jubilation as the stereo set blared out captivating sounds.
Drinking is not bad, but the impact of excessive drinking is dangerous. Believe it or not it can kill. It can lead to disastrous consequences. Naturally, wine makes the heart rejoice, yes, but the way some people gulp large quantities of alcohol at a stretch is alarming. Some even boast of the number of bottle they can consume at a sitting. Is this not foolishness? Why not use that spare money for something more tangible than spraying it on excessive alcohol.
Some people even compete in wine-drinking. Two cartoons of beer may be ordered and you, in order not to be taken for a fool will try as much as you can to consume a large quantity of the beer in a very short time until at least half of the carton is gone. By this time your eyes have changed to reddish brown. The friends may cheer you up for your smartness in being able to exhaust-six bottles in less than one hour.
Down you go again for the second time. This time the story will not be the same again, for by the time you have finished the ninth bottle your flat stomach bulges, your eyes swell and your legs stagger, and what else? You feel like visiting the toilet.
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