A re-imagining of an occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge by Ambrose Bierce.

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     A man stood on a dirt floor in a dark alley somewhere in the streets of Bagdad, Looking down at the swirling dust at his feet.  The man’s hands were behind his back, the wrists bound with a nylon cord.  A blind fold covered his face only allowing him to see the ground below.  He heard the incessant Arabic chatter of his captors as they fumbled with a video camera.  The light from the camera penetrated the thin bandana being used as a blindfold.  The man in charge of the operation may have been the equivalent of a captain.  The captain Hammadi Awdah abd Farhan ordered two of the militia men to drop the young prisoner to his knees.  A couple of sentries stood at each end of the alley and cars could be heard driving by.  The sentries held AK-47 rifles, Russian or Chinese it didn’t really matter the country was awash with them.

     Beyond the sentinels and the alleys lies a great city.  A million people lived in the urban jungle no doubt the prisoner had friends nearby, but also in the maze of buildings and alleys lay a thousand enemies ready to cut him down on sight.  In the house behind him he could hear the spectators; some he knew would work with the American’s if it were profitable or fulfilled a need.  Others were true believers in the cause and would lay down their lives willingly at the guns of his friends or in a brilliant flash of death tearing apart a marketplace full of their fellow citizens simply to send a message. 

      The man on his knees was about twenty- one years of age.  He was a soldier, a man who had voluntarily walked into the army recruitment office and signed up.  He was a good looking and strong soldier-His features were a broad nose, and strong jaw, kind eyes but serious in nature.  His hair had grown slightly since his capture but was still cut close enough to meet army regulations.  The clothes he wore were the same since capture.  They held the sweat, stench and pain from weeks of confinement.  Had the blindfold been lifted the captors would have seen defiance.  This prisoner was a dedicated soldier whose belief in God and Country held him strong.  He would show no weakness and hadn’t despite being displayed on video once before he had never broken.  He was certain they would kill him but as a good soldier does he resigned himself to death and filled his thoughts only with escape or opportunities to do harm to those who held him.

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  • BullwinkleMuse on Jun 30, 2009

    Thanks for this tribute. So many incredible stories have come out of this war, as with all wars. I appreciate your taking the time to honor some of them in print. – Moose

  • Judith Dupree on Jul 1, 2009

    What can I say, So many Mothers wait at Home for news of their Sons , I know how this feels but not the loss of a child, I hate the Fact there has to be any wars , but there is and so it will go on , for as far as i can see nothing is gained from killing.

  • Andrew Davies on Jul 2, 2009

    Well written, I believe you have captured the essence of story.

  • RS Wing on Jul 7, 2009

    powerful reality…wow that was good, the piece, is this a true story as I think it to be? My God what the hell are we doing over there anyway? I don’t get this whole new world order philosophy….it’s not new at all, just another example of history repeating itself. Real animated story and sadly embraced. Great piece of writing!

  • irishpen on Jul 14, 2009

    This is so truly intense. And written so well. Thank you~~~

  • Theresa Johnson on Sep 8, 2009

    wonderful work.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 8, 2009

    Far out. I read your work and then wonder why I bother. You are terrific – you truly are.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Sep 8, 2009

    Still a stirring and moving tribute, my friend. Thank you once again.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 8, 2009

    Strong writing about an awful side of life-and-death situations that are more prevalent than we, in our cocoons, are ever aware of.
    I had to dig to find things to pick at in your piece; all I could come up with is that you might want to study the use of commas. I always have trouble with them, and am never sure if I’m using too few or two many.

  • David Crerand on Sep 8, 2009

    Great job Brad. Powerful.

  • raptor22 on Sep 8, 2009

    Very touching story.

  • Tlchimes on Sep 8, 2009

    You write wonderfully about a sad moment too many folks know all too well.

    Thank you.

  • STEVE666 on Sep 8, 2009

    Hey, a well written and quite compelling story there, Brad. There’s no doubt many unfortunate tales as such happening every day over there in that damn war.

  • B.S. Kitty on Sep 8, 2009

    I can’t believe I’ve read this and haven’t left a comment. Wierd. Great job, Brad. Now I need a tissue. xo

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Sep 9, 2009

    War is hell, and nobody can say otherwise, there is not one Matthew, there are many and dare I say that they are on both sides.

  • Ronne on Sep 9, 2009

    i love the way you started this article, keeping the reader absorbed until the end.
    a touching truth, thanks for sharing brad!

  • miraj on Sep 9, 2009

    tears fill the corner of my eye,You have captured the essence of valor and bravery impeccably in this thrilling account,god knows how many more stories like this lies trampled in the streets of Baghdad.A grand tribute to one of the most fearless soldiers of America.Thank you.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 9, 2009

    Brad, as you know I have different views. I cannot feel sorry for somebody who died after signing up for something they knew had a likely hood of killing them.. its unfair for us to cheer when they kill and not realize that they could be killled. I equally feel little pity for bull riders who get killed knowing the risk they took.. I mean seriously.. and don’t even get me started on those fools who do that “running with the Bulls” thing in Spain then whine about a broken rib.
    its the families I pity.

  • oldster on Sep 9, 2009

    Good story Brad as usual.
    Futility personified.

  • BradONeill on Sep 9, 2009

    I have no problem with anyone disagreeing with Me B. in fact I love hearing intelligent arguments. I would like to remind you though that in Afghanistan under the Taliban it would be against the law for you to read and write. Also in Iraq under Saddam Huissane you could be tortured for disagreeing with him and I am not talking about harmless water boarding or frat boy pranks like Abu Graib. I am talking about drill bits and hammers. But hey why shouldn’t we just respect other cultures and let them do what ever they want to their people right?

  • BradONeill on Sep 9, 2009

    Oh and one other thing, I don’t think we should feel sorry for Mathew Maupin either. We should feel thankful, and grateful that men like him are willing to answer the call while the rest of us go to the mall.

  • cafftee on Sep 10, 2009

    Leaving politics and the tragic realities behind this piece completely aside, if I may, what a wonderfully woven story. Artfully put together, I was gripped throughout.

  • katie marie on Sep 17, 2009

    Finally got around to reading this one Brad. Very well written my friend. Felt the feelings, heard the sounds, saw through his eyes.

  • maranatha on Sep 23, 2009

    I, too, both enjoyed and labored through this tribute. Men who would willingly put themselves at risk for a country full of people like me who they will never know – or even for a belief that is pure and right and will benefit the many – are heroes, no matter how you cut it. God bless them for their sacrifice, and folks like you who will not let them be forgotten.

  • HHouston on Nov 9, 2009

    Men and women, like Matthew .. fight for freedom from all oppression, so you don’t have to. Somebody has to. This story has tears glistening in my eyes too.

  • hfj on May 13, 2010

    Great tribute story for the brave Brad. Great writing and discription of the event. Too many of these tragic stories have emerged from this terrible place. Well done friend

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