Sixteen-year-old Aaron finds it is more difficult to share his new faith with his old friends than he ever imagined it would be. How will he get thm to open their ears long enough to ever open their hearts? Time to get radical! A short story for teens and adults who care about them.

I heard recently about a father and son who found a treasure while plowing their field somewhere in England. It was a huge discovery-Viking loot from some raiding expedition, or something. Nobody knew it was there until the plow unearthed it. That’s how I feel-like I’ve discovered something incredible without even trying. Now all I have to do is figure out how to get my friends to realize how great my discovery really is.

When Paul invited me to go on the ski trip, I went to ski. I mean, it was a ski trip, right? The forecast was perfect-just the right kind of snow, the right amount, super cool lodges and pretty girls. Who could turn down an invite like that? Not me.

Not even an invite from a church geek. I mean, I didn’t have anything against churches, except that they always seemed to butt into people’s personal business. But I wasn’t after church. I was after a good ski weekend, and maybe a pretty girl. Southside was a church known for having lots of pretty girls. That’s probably part of why I went.

And I did have a great weekend. I skied a lot, drank hot chocolate in the lodge while I sort of listened to their Bible study, and had time to really think about my life.

Not that my life was bad. It was the quintessential, perfect teen life. I mean, dude, I had everything. I had the best friends from the best crowd in the best high school in town. I drove one of the hottest cars and dated all of the hottest girls. In the fall, I filled my time being quarterback for a state championship level football team, and in the spring I pitched for our not-quite-so-great baseball team. My grades may not have set any record books on fire, but they were okay. And every weekend I had more social invites than I could shake a stick at.

The parties were my life, and I didn’t see anything weird about that. My motto was “everybody who is anybody parties”. And I certainly was the king of the somebodys. If guys like Paul were ever mentioned at the parties, I laughed at them. They always acted like they had something no one else had, some special secret or something. All I could see was that they were missing out.

So along comes this ski trip.

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