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Age “The Divine Story of The Man Who Defied Time”

LilRoastBeef on Sep 26, 2009
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A snippet of my next full length piece. A man gravitates towards the nostalgic while already in his youth.

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  • lillyrose on Sep 27, 2009

    WOW that is getting very interesting! They say your life flashes before your eyes when your close to death. I will be keeping my eyes open for more of this! well done you. x

  • XXElleXX on Sep 27, 2009

    I haven’t read anything quite like this before LilRoastBeef :-)
    Near death experiences and out-of-body experiences are not things I subscribe to but apparently..it happens. There is a website dedicated to this sort of thing..hehehehahaha.. http://www.gnosticweb.com/index.php?PageID=477 ..you showed good creative expression here :-)

  • XXElleXX on Sep 27, 2009

    By the way..there’s a ‘Creative Writing’ thread in the forum somewhere..you should check it out LilRoastBeef..might be worth putting this story in there.

  • Sashya on Sep 29, 2009

    Nice write and layout. I agree with Elleword, you should join a creative writing forum. I don’t know if she is mocking but i honestly think you deserve to be apart of a creative writing group!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 1, 2009

    very well written….

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 1, 2009

    A powerful story, It will be a success I’m sure.

  • fragile18 on Oct 2, 2009

    nice story. I love the ending.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 6, 2009

    This was a really good story. I enjoyed it.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 9, 2009

    Awesome story. Again, it kept me visualizing every single detail.

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