Sometimes stuff happens even to spies.

” Listen” said one of the foreign guards” Even if he is one of ours we can’t take him in the truck without paperwork authourizing it sorry”he added to me while turning away.
”Maybe we’ll swing back in a couple of days when we have the paperwork” said the other guard and then they drove away. I turned back towards the camp dissapointed but confident that If I had lasted this long I would last a couple of days longer.
”Were are you going’’said one of the remaining guards.
”Back to my cell I suppose” I said at this point very confused.
”No way” said the other guard”Our higher ups said you are no longer our responsibility”
”You’re kidding right” I said with disbelief.
”Sorry buddy we don’t care were you go but you can’t stay here”
”Of course you care were I go I’m a hostile agent” I said my voice rising to a shout of desperation”I’m Agent 420 I have secret information about your camp I’ll bring your entire country down around your ears in a week If I’m left to my own devices you’ll be responsible for your own country’s destruction”. The guard answered while closing the gates with the most crushing words I have ever heard.
”I guess we’ll just have to risk it”

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  • summer18 on Nov 10, 2008

    Entertaining and felt like a bit of a throwback to those classics of yesteryear.. loved it :)

  • gabbic1219 on Nov 11, 2008

    i must say…amazing writing skills,I am impressed ,agent 420…keep up the good work!

  • Jo Bingham on Nov 11, 2008

    Again, it sounds like the beginning (or even middle) of something more. You should develop a plot line for one of your short writes and expand it. You may just have a profitable novel on your hands.

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Nov 12, 2008

    The story is good and, as Jo mentioned, could be the middle of an even bigger story. You need to work on your sentence and paragraph structure. Keep up the good work.

  • Donnalyn Weir on Nov 18, 2008

    Its great! keep writing:)

  • Pixie of Pain on Nov 21, 2008

    Keep it up doll. Your creative writing is excellent.

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