Will Mikey succeed through his first mission read to find out.
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after two years of training I finally get to have some fun. My mission to achievethe data card from the illegal cloneing facility. I was being airlifted to my destination, the ride made me a little seasick. I finally got there and guys shot at the helicopter but that was no match for its outstanding Minny gun. They knew I was there great. But I found a vent on the roof just my size leading to the bathroom. As I opened the door slowly someone walked in but I didn’t hesitate to hit him right upside the head dropping him right there. He had the key card to the cloneing room, so I took it. I walked outside the bathroom and saw a guy walking down the hall on guard so when he wasn’t looking in my direction. I took off and he saw me so as he was pulling his gun out I shot him with my pistol. I was a sure shot and hit him in the heart. There was nobody in site so I saw the cloneing lab and went in. It was so sick I thought I was going to throw up. Body’s of people dead, including children I was going to cry I couldn’t help it I did for a couple seconds,I was more mad than sad. But how much I wanted to help every one of those people I had to stick to the mission. My communicator device had a girl named Jane talking to me,”let the data card download first.” I hid in the closet because there were people patrolling the hallways now that they had seen a dead guy in it imsure. Then the gang leader chalk walked in and I pushed a rolling table at himso that he was pinned against the wall and his power couldn’t Carrie it. Then my head set rang again,”take the gang leader.” I shot him with a serum to make him unconscious, and the helicopter had a rope right outside our window, so I grabbed chalk and grabbed the rope. We couldn’t climb up so I held on to chalk tell we got a safe distance away from their base and we went inside the helicopter. I helped interrogate him but he wouldn’t talk so some mysterys are still to solve.

For this mission I got 50,000 dollars, a new gun m-101, a new car, and a house.

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  • shaun on Mar 16, 2010

    you are an extrodinary writer good enough to write books!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • yourmom00345 on Mar 16, 2010

    how many stories are you making?

  • SUPERARTIST on Mar 16, 2010

    well im hopeing I can make 20 in this series an another 20 in agents 2.

  • SUPERARTIST on Mar 16, 2010

    I have a cuple stories in the making

  • RS Wing on May 21, 2010

    kind of nutty but creative

  • Allison Jae on Sep 28, 2010

    This is better than the last one. Great job.

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