Comments on: Ailsa

By: Owlwings

Owlwings — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 21:18:43 +0000

Very nice writing, P1kef1sh. Just the right touch of wistfulness, leaving the triumphal fanfare to the very last moment. It is good – very good!

By: Franny

Franny — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 13:44:46 +0000

Well done Pikey. What a beaut story…I too became quite caught up in the drudgery that was this woman’s life. I’d love to have read the card she left him and I’d loved to have been a fly on the wall when they realised she was gone…what a great story…you have a gift my friend…truly.

By: Mary Patricia Bird

Mary Patricia Bird — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 20:45:17 +0000

Great story with quite a surprise, and pleasant, ending. Good work.

By: Dorypanda

Dorypanda — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 15:31:47 +0000

That’s a brilliant story, I didn’t expect that ending. Keep up the writing.

By: JulioBandido

JulioBandido — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 12:07:15 +0000

You are good. Shall we all expect you now to go full-blast on writing?

May the GOOD LORD always keep the winds behind your sails.

By: Mtdewgurl74

Mtdewgurl74 — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 11:20:23 +0000

Excellant penmanship Steve. I liked this story alot, It says they are hope out there for many who find themselves in the same place in their life and that they are always hope and that they just have to take that step in the right direction for them. They don’t have to wait to win a few million to do so. Just have support waiting. loved your story..

By: elitess

elitess — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 09:48:25 +0000

Good work pike, keep it up – i am expecting a new story from you soon

By: P1kef1sh

P1kef1sh — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 09:01:57 +0000

Thank you all for your very encouraging comments. I appreciate them all. L C Sanders: £30 million is about $43.5 million US.

By: LC Sanders

LC Sanders — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 05:52:41 +0000

Wow, I was surprised with the ending. I like to twist my endings also. I really didn\’t think she would really leave at the end but for that much money I\’m sure I would leave too! ( I don\’t know how much 30 million pounds are in England, can you tell me?)

http://www.triond.com/users/LC+Sanders

By: judy43

judy43 — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 02:09:52 +0000

I loved it. Very well written. Keep writing