A twisted love story.

I met new friends to stay away from old ones. The old friends knew it from the start and when they warned me of her two-faced nature I used to lose my temper. In a flash I remembered breaking Joe’s jaw for talking bad about her. Now come to think of it, Joe was right.

All in a flash…

I remembered all the exhausted times of working double shifts to keep her like a queen. How I spent all my time and energy in making her feel special in every way….all for what? I would never question her why she asked me for large sums of money…then a steaming rage, so that’s how Dave got himself a new car! It all made sense now!

False company can lead you into doing false things. I got involved in getting wasted, so that I could forget the woman who destroyed my living peace. I would never trust another. I would never love another. I would die this way. I was on the road to destruction and I knew it….If only I realised it!

In the midst of all the downhill at my job front and the decaying personal life, I met an angel. She entered my life when I was totally destroyed…. I had picked up a fight with a stranger and the stranger was an angel.

I was always a God fearing soul and believe it or not, He knows how to strike you with a lightning bolt when you least expect it….

All in a flash….

My life changed again. I carefully watched this little angel’s behaviour, the way she carried herself in front of others and how she valued family and life. There was absolutely no resemblance of my past. The more I hated her, I realised I was falling in love with her. She had a heart of gold and no one bothered finding it.

All in a flash…

I remember putting off the cigarette and decided to smoke her instead….forever. And yet I was so easily bound to a person who knew what I had been through, who never hated me for who I was, who treasured me and who actually loved me!

All in a flash…

We got married and we have a beautiful daughter.

The angel is my love, my wife, my everything. Our daughter is my life.

All in a flash…

As far as Dave’s girl friend is concerned….well, what can I say – Yes, she stumbled upon my path when I was walking hand in hand with my wife. There was nothing said more than a hello. The rest was understood. She was still single, Dave was treating her like trash and she wished she was holding my hand…I never saw her again.

Life has it’s own tricky ways of teaching you lessons. Never harm those who do harm to you. Harm will automatically find its way to them. Instead of contemplating revenge, heal yourself, get up and walk on. Your life is far more valuable. In a flash, you fell into a ditch, so what… get up, clean yourself and move ahead…you have a long way to go!

All in a flash…..

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  • swatilohani on May 20, 2009

    great

  • Darla Cooke on May 20, 2009

    Very good story.

  • STEVE666 on May 20, 2009

    Uplifting tale, with a beginning, middle and happy-end, epitomizing the cliche: ‘What goes around, comes around’.
    Great write, Kaavs.

  • richard reed on May 20, 2009

    WOW! That was amazing! I loved it! You are an awesome writer I feel blessed to be able to view your work..thanks for sharing,.,stay blessed..,your friend.,/fan,Rich

  • George W Whitehead on May 20, 2009

    Great work, Kaavs.

  • California Dreamer on May 21, 2009

    Nice Story, and the picture went great with it, great job!

  • swatilohani on May 22, 2009

    loved your twisted story

  • revivor on May 25, 2009

    really good writing, held me gripped the whole way – great ending too – revivor

  • Nikita K on Aug 17, 2009

    I like the technique you’ve used and even in terms of plot, this story embodies perfection. Good job.

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