Sad love story.

It was one summer evening, Joan was sitting on her couch remembering the wonderful day that she had spent with Peter. Though the start of the day was lousy with the heat of the summer sun, the day she spent with peter just turned the boring day into day full of romance. Dreams of Garden, where they loved to date has always been a new and enjoyable place to go in-spite of the numerous time of visits. But that day the garden seem quiet different, as if every flower, every leaves and branches of different plants and bushes were trying to speak and tell something. Winds were blowing softly,healing the heat of the burning sun and there they were sitting on a bench of one corner of the garden. Soft kisses and hugs, deep talks and laughs led the arms of the watch swing so fast that  both of them could rarely calculate the time they spent on the bench of the corner of the garden that day.

“How much do you love me pete”?,”Joan”,”Joan”the sound was not of Peter,but was of her sister Jane calling her, Joan got back to her real world from the world of memoirs with Peter which she spent on that day. It was the telephone call that bothered her in her day dream and let her sister call her.

 ”Helloow”, Joan said.”Joan”, it was Peter.Joan said,”Pete! i was just remembering about you, and you just called me, I am not understanding am missing you today lot and..,” “Joan there is something I need to talk about , not in phone I want to meet you right now, rush and reach cafe beans by 7 pm”.Peter interrupted, without further question Joan said,”Okay Pete”. She hurried and took a cab. On her way she thought lot the reasons for Pete to call for a meeting at once.” May be there is any surprise that Pete wants to give me or may be he just making fool out of me, no, but Pete was damn serious, there must be something that he wants to tell me or wanted to tell me. What ever issue it is I ll always support my Pete and will let him ease. I love him lot and there is nothing i cannot do for him and his will,” Joan thought.

Engine stopped. Joan stepped out of the cab, payed the bill and got into Cafe Beans and she found Peter sittin on the second table of third row. Peter was in grey Aarmani t-shirt and sky blueish Lewi’s jeans. Bulb hanging above the table where Peter was sitting was acting like a focus light, focusing Peter and makin Joan feel like she was somewhere else alone with Peter. Peter gave her a wave and she returned back to the cafe crowded with people of different races and size. She reached to his table and took a seat and asked”Pete, any problem”? “yes, Joan. Am sorry” Peter busted,”i could not tell you earlier about this. I have a flight tonightand am going to the States. It was my parents. They always forced me to move States for my MBA and i always denied because i fear of being away from you”. There was a silence for few moments and Joan spoke out”So, Pete you mean to say that you are leaving Nepal today and moving towards state for your MBA?” Peter replied,”Joan am really sorry”,taking a deep breathe, “i should have told you and discussed about this earlier, but eergggggh.. matter of fact I was in between making you and my parents happy, but I think i failed to do so with you and”,”Hushhhhhhhh Pete! Pete!… you are just going for your studies honey,”Joan interrupting Peter,” you aren’t leaving me are you? I am not that selfish to stop you from going ahead for you career, darling. I love you Pete and ill always. Don’t worry, my sweetheart, am all fine, i can wait for you and ill wait.” “I never thought this would be so easy to talk with you. thank-you Joan for being so easy,” Peter replied in a relaxed way. Taking out a white envelope from the left pocket of his jeans he said,” this is something I have written, my unspoken feelings for you. Donot read it here. You read it after my flight,after 1 am,” then he handed the envelope to Joan and the final words he said to her  before their departure was “Joan i love you lot!”

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  • snehame on May 24, 2010

    do read it plzz…

  • sushmit khadka on May 24, 2010

    dammi cha dd

  • amar singh basnet on May 24, 2010

    nice one pooh…

  • rubina kc on May 24, 2010

    dammi cha ni ta dd.kaha bata yesto dammi ni

  • junkedpics on May 24, 2010

    lop it…

  • kor3Anme on May 24, 2010

    biyaneo sarangeyo!!

  • snehame on May 24, 2010

    keep it up pooh..

  • HKP on May 24, 2010

    heard this kindda story earlier ….

  • tunds on May 24, 2010

    likes it..

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