One of the things I found after a few weeks on my own in the mountain, was that I had nothing much to say to other people.

An unexpected discovery

The story links to some of my other stories – Valley of Mist being the one describing my stay in these mountains.

One of the things I found after a few weeks on my own in the mountain, was that I had nothing much to say to other people.  The only interesting things in my life were discoveries I made in the forest and mountain:  large rocks, old trees, natural shelters, hidden streams, a river disappearing under the sand, to re-surface a few kilometers further…..  You had to walk to these places, sometimes for hours, which not all people were prepared to do.

Some of my friends did come to visit me.  We mostly strolled a little, swam in Abel’s Pool and sat on the stoep drinking red wine, unravelling some of their emotional issues, which they came to clarify for themselves in the misty space of my temporary abode.

One was an artist (still is) and at that time very much into cannabis (probably still is).   I did not use drugs at all (not counting wine) but her cannabian thoughts were not in conflict with my own almost permanent meditative state.  As we basked in the sun on a rock in Abel’s Pool, she told me that the waterfall sounded like a choir of voices.  I could hear that – even though the thought did not come from me.  From then on it always sounded like an immense choir comprising all the voices – from deep bass to high soprano, with an unsurpassed repertoire.

When she went back, she left me a hand made cigarette rolled with cannabis (a “daggazol”)* which I hid in the kitchen and then forgot about for a few weeks. 

Then came a week of real rain.  It was difficult to walk far and difficult to find firewood.  I had read all the books in my possession and was really getting bored. It was while staring at a smoky log that I remembered the “daggazol” hidden in an empty drawer. I have never liked smoking, so decided to make tea with my spoonfuls worth of cannabis.

I continued staring into the smoky fire, sipping my tea.  Nothing happened. 

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  • Farzeela Fee Faisal on Apr 21, 2011

    Elnavann, your story is strange. I liked it, are you sure you felt for real during the visit to that hut… can’t believe! Why didn’t you borrowed another cannabis filled cigarette from your friend?

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 21, 2011

    an interesting story but also very weird

  • Swish3 on Apr 21, 2011

    great story

  • lian rosa on Apr 21, 2011

    Hmmm If we carefully thought about it ….did the cannabis led you to such discovery?

  • elnavann on Apr 21, 2011

    What led to the discovery? I think it was also the disorientation created by the mist – I looked closer at my immediate surroundings and saw a path I did not notice before

  • ashan1614 on Apr 21, 2011

    I am intrigued by your story and your amazing discovery! Pays to be a little adventurous, doesn’t it?

  • tankermone on Apr 21, 2011

    I thought you were leading to a cannabis twilight zone story, but the place was still there. Interesting story, and I loved it!

  • Wrath Warbone on Apr 21, 2011

    Nice story. I liked the descripton of the scenrey and the inner peace. The same thing happened to my brother the first time he smoked, which was nothing. Some people react that way, it seems. I do not know that it is important as all that. Thanks for a relaxing read.

  • sanaahmed on Apr 21, 2011

    great story

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 21, 2011

    Different surroundings can be intoxicating.

  • Cuissade Mission on Apr 21, 2011

    Interesting.

  • lapasan on Apr 21, 2011

    A pleasant experience at that place.

  • Noisy Cricket on Apr 21, 2011

    Onward, adventure is best discovered, even under your circumstances. Awesome adventure. If Magic ever lets on, please share. Thanks for the ride.

  • Erin Miller on Apr 21, 2011

    Very interesting story. I think your cannibas was laced lol.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Apr 22, 2011

    Happy for your amazing discovery.

  • Starpisces on Apr 22, 2011

    thanks for sharing with us your deep thoughts.
    I have yet to discover more… I will..

  • alvinwriter on Apr 22, 2011

    Amazing experience!

  • Dreamy777 on Apr 22, 2011

    great one like it

  • vijayanths on Apr 22, 2011

    Interesting share.

  • Cyni1106 on Apr 26, 2011

    Beautiful and discriptive, thanks for the share!

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