Short story I wrote in the 8th grade.

Animals Get Powers

        Once long ago two wizards lived in a magical forest. One was good and one was evil. They met one day and battled, as they fought alot of animals came and saw and the great wizard said “if we can only fight then let these animals have these good and evial powers”. Edward the bad wizard said “diz-wiz-siz” and all their powers went to just one animal but one human. They called the lion the Great King of the Fores. But Edward had a daughter and without anyone knowing about it gave his powers to her instead of an animal.

100 Years Later

       After 100 years of the Lions rule the evil daughter of Edward had finally discoverd her powers and was getting an army ready to fight the Lion “King of the Forest”. But he didn’t know of this evil army or the evil daughter. And as he was getting ready for a walk they attaked and took over the forest. But as Legend has told of a young man who would come and take over the forest, overthroughing the evil queen he would rule forever. But the evil queen found out and sent out troops to kill him before he found out his destiny of ruling the forest. And they set out searching for him but never found him, untill one day he came into the forest and they followed him to a hut, where he was talking to animals and trees and they attaked but failed to kill him because as they didnt know he already knew his destiny and build an army. A few days later he over throughed the Evil Queen and took over the Forest as King of the Forest, following his fathers footsteps he became the Greatest Ruler ever.

The End…

by: Jared L

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  • rebell115 on Aug 14, 2010

    any tips on writing????

  • Netty net on Aug 15, 2010

    I like how you have imagination, and you tell a story.

  • rebell115 on Aug 17, 2010

    @netty net thanks!

  • choochoo on Oct 16, 2010

    he should burn that forest and build a big shopping mall there.

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