It’s not always easy to cross the bridge when you know it’s a one-way journey.



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I see you across the bridge!
A sharp contrast to the pale blue sky.
The arch mockingly invites,
As so many times I’ve passed it by.

This structure tempts my logic,
But all I can do is stand and stare.
It’s quite a journey to tread,
Leaving trackable burdens to bear.

I knew you needed to cross,
And inevitable it became.
I predicted your choices,
For the life you needed to reclaim.

Timing kept me on this side,
As you paired and floated in tandem.
I sit alone by this edge,
Now sensing that your trip was random.

This is a bridge of impasse,
With a one-way transition to you.
Your energy arcs over,
And shocks my heart as it passes through.

My mood reflects the sky’s hue,
As I mourn the division we face.
How lovely it could have been,
If the bridge led us to the same place.

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  • Darla Cooke on Dec 29, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 29, 2009

    Awww Linda Lori, what a wonderful journey you take your readers on through your words of choice. It feels as though I were right there trying to decide upon moving forward. Wonderfully done. Thank You for sharing your talents with us all…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • thuanynguyen on Dec 29, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 29, 2009

    Nicely said!

  • AlmaG on Dec 29, 2009

    That’s just lovely linda. I also made a poem about meeting at the same bridge.

  • albert1jemi on Dec 30, 2009

    excellent poem

  • jaysonv on Dec 30, 2009

    great post.. very interesting.. :)

  • Greg Seltz on Dec 30, 2009

    Very nice…

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 30, 2009

    It’s well said, too often we take different paths.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 1, 2010

    Nice poem…

  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 2, 2010

    That was written perfectly!

  • yes me on Jan 7, 2010

    Lovely poem and good imagery
    keep up the good work linda

    Yours matt

  • fashion girl on Jan 7, 2010

    strong and powerful poem…

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 12, 2010

    The opening line was Brilliant ..

  • Themax on Jan 14, 2010

    Nice poem and Very well imagination,Thanks for sharing :)

  • mkd1788 on Jan 25, 2010

    very creative you are..

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