A little something I wrote about how a prisoner ended up in prison, it’s a romance/disaster I guess you’d say.

Prison Yard

In a prison yard guards were running around busily. An inmate layed spread across the ground bleeding. Stabbed in the stomach. He kept saying, “I’m so sorry, I’m so sorry” over and over again. His life started to flash before his eye’s.

Child Hood

He remebered what it was like growing up. His father died when he was young and his mother was a drug attict. He remembered her popping pills in the kitchen all the time. When he was seven he had to go to rehab because he was a drug attict. Shit all he had to do was go and open a draw in the kitchen. He never thought much for other people when he was growing up. He only did what he wanted, didn’t matter what it was. He found out a kid that he hated in school had pot in his locker so he broke into the kids locker and stole half his stash then went and told the school. He was reckless when it came to life. He figured if your not living the way you want to then why live?

The Girl

One day at school he meant this girl at lunch named Mary. He accidentally bumped into her at lunch. he swung around to tell her to watch were she was fucking going and he couldn’t. For the first time in his life he thought “Shit, is this love?” They talked for a half and hour till lunch ended and decided to go see a movie together. She was everything he ever wanted and he never even know it till he meant her. She made him straighten up his way’s. She made him go to rehab when he needed it, quit smoking everything. When she found him he was a drug dealing alcoholic and she turned him into a good well intentioned man. he owed his life to her and he knew it, deep sown inside he alway’s know he wasn’t good enough for her, he alway’s knew that if he stayed with her it would end up a disaster but her couldn’t bare to tell her to go away.

The Wedding

Five years after they meant on a nice sunny day on an october morning they went down to the small chapel near their house and got married. They knew it was meant to be. He remebered thinking “She’s the most beutiful thing I’ve ever seen.” As she walked dwon the isle towards him and the preacher. The party afterward was amazing. He remebered that it was the first party that he had ever gone to without drugs and it was by far the best. Later on that night they left for thier honeymoon to a small island in hawaii. They had a great time and enjoyed themselves, if ya know what I’m talking about.

The Incident

One week a man broke into their house when he was at work. She was pregant with their first child. A baby girl, they were going to name it Stacey. The man thought that he was there alone and started walking around looking for the valuables. When he ran into her he freak and the outcome wasn’t all that good. The police looked up and down and tried to find the suspect but with media coverage growing the case was getting more ergant to solve. After reviewing all their evidence they figured it had to be the husband. They figured he was the only one they could think of who would have a motive. They were wrong and he couldn’t live with that, so he did what he had to do, after all he had to go be a father to that little girl.

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  • goodselfme on Oct 31, 2008

    Filled with all good components for a story. Good plot, suspense, content well poised and structured well from start to finish.
    And a hearty WELCOME to triond too!

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