"Hold on!" She said to herself, stopping in her tracks. "Where do I go from here?" "I…I’m lost."

        Suddenly, the Professor’s body began to fade away before her eyes  

        “What!?”

        The only physical remain on the ground was Mary’s coat.  She lifted it up and wore it and then, after paying her final respects to Professor Stonehead, continued straight ahead,with the large white book, entitled ‘Revival’ in her right hand.   

      “Hold on!”  She said to herself, stopping in her tracks.  “Where do I go from here?”  “I…I’m lost.”  As if in reply, the red pouch in her left hand began to vibrate.  Mary pulled the laces apart and dug in, instinctively and felt something metallic inside.  When she pulled it out, her eyes lit up brightly and a smile formed across her face.   “A compass!”  It was pointing North and so, Mary followed it blindly.   It was now nearing nightfall and the sky was a Prussian blue.  As she walked, Mary kept repeating the message.  In fact, it was more than a message.  It was a concealed riddle inside the message, waiting to be cracked.  Mary repeated the riddle again and again, in an attempt to solve it.

     “Beyond The Dark Trees and Past The Shining Lake is Where You Will Find Me…”       “Beyond The Dark Trees and Past The Shining Lake is Where You Will Find Me…”       “Beyond The Dark Trees and Past The Shining Lake is Where You Will Find Me…” 
    “But what does ’shining’ signify?”  She asked herself.  A moments silence and then,

     “Of course!  It has to be some kind of a glass.  A mirror perhaps?”  Suddenly, the red pouch vibrated once more and Mary opened the lace, once more, and reached inside.  This time, she felt a round brittle object, rather delicate and pulled it out.

    “It’s a mirror!”  But it’s glare was so bright that she was almost blinded by its radiance.  Mary placed it back in the pouch and looked at her compass.  As it was now almost nightfall, the compass lit up itself so Mary could make out the pointing needle.  It was now inclined towards North West.  Mary followed on.  The yellow crystal she had consumed earlier had given her so much energy that she neither felt hunger and thirst, but she remembered Professor Stone telling her that she was in fact dying.  A disturbing thought entered in her mind and she said,

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Comments (18)
  • My World on Oct 10, 2010

    Nice Post………

    thanks for share.

  • CVSivaprakashan on Oct 10, 2010

    Smooth and enjoyable. I need to reed earlier chapters as well.

  • Ethics0006 on Oct 10, 2010

    Good Post

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Oct 10, 2010

    Wow…I too was petrified after reading this chapter. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

  • The Soul Explorer on Oct 10, 2010

    I enjoy reading. Thanks!

  • wonder on Oct 11, 2010

    Ingenious objects,it is turning interesting all the more.

  • giritharanj on Oct 11, 2010

    nice share – gj

  • diyakapoor on Oct 11, 2010

    nice post

  • addjust on Oct 11, 2010

    amazinly great

  • Rehoboth on Oct 11, 2010

    $- thanks for sharing-$

  • Kaye TM on Oct 11, 2010

    great chapter!

  • Sharif Ishnin on Oct 11, 2010

    Wonderful continuation. You have perfected the art of writing stories on Triond Rajeev. Fiction writers here should all learn from you. Brilliant and very enjoyable mystery.Looking forward to the next one my friend.

  • Luna Morena on Oct 11, 2010

    What a mystery. It´s a great story with a wonderful imagination on it. You´ll never imagine what´s going to happen next. Great suspense Rajeev.

  • CC23 on Oct 11, 2010

    interesting story. i wonder how many chapters are left to read. i wonder what ending you will have.

  • Philyra Clio on Oct 11, 2010

    i enjoy reading your story…

  • CA Johnson on Oct 15, 2010

    I loved this chapter, Rajeev. That must be pretty scary for Mary to think that she could be dying.

  • kiran8 on Oct 18, 2010

    Great share, will have to look up all the other ones as well !

  • Rhodora Bande on Oct 30, 2010

    I like how you incorporated the riddle in this chapter. I am also happy that finally Mary is in control of herself.

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