A young boy dreams of being a great scientist. Life doesn’t always turn out the way we expect.

The older man looked down.

“I did make a discovery in the last few weeks though. People have been dropping by to see me: Colleagues, former students, and friends. The all wanted to ay goodbye. I heard a lot of stories.”

The older man paused and looked out his office window. The younger man waited for him to go on.

“You know, not one of them said anything about my scientific work. They talked about I affected their work and their life. They talked about me as a friend, a teacher, even a rival.”

The older man turned to the younger man and smiled.

“I discovered that it is who you are that people remember you for, not what you did. That makes it easier for me to find happiness in my new life.”

The Box

The older man looked around the office.

“That reminds me . . .” The older man got up, walked over to a shelf, and took down a small box. “I almost forgot to take this.”

The younger man watched as his mentor brought the box back to his desk. Written on the side of box was “Billy’s Big Discovery”.

The older man continued. “This always reminds me of my mother” For a second his eyes seemed to glow. “She did this the day I decided to be a scientist”.

“I made my first big discovery on the beach and she put it away. I’ve never looked at it since. I didn’t want to untie her knot.”

The older man tried to untie the knot, but in the end, he had to cut it with a knife. He took off the lid to look inside.

“It doesn’t look very impressive now, but it was very important to a five year old boy.”

One Final Discovery

The older man continued to look into the box. His brow furrowed and a puzzled expression settled on his face.

“That odd . . .”

The older man started to examine the object more closely. He motioned to the younger man to come closer. He shows him the object in the box.

“What do you make of that?”

The younger man looked into the box. Then back at his mentor as if to ask what he should be seeing. The older man motioned him to look again. Looking back into the box, the younger man gave a start.

“Do you see it now?”

“Yes. Yes I do.”

“Do you know what it means?”

“We were wrong.”

“Yes we were.” The older man laughed. “Oh well, it is only 40 years of my work down the drain.”

The younger man said, “But, we have some hope now”.

The older man smiled. “Yes we do”.

The younger man gazed at his mentor and said, “Not everyone gets to make such an important discovery”.

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Comments (10)
  • ashan1614 on Oct 16, 2009

    I’m definitely curious to know what’s in the box! Great story thus far – looking forward to the rest. :)

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 16, 2009

    Great story..

  • DynamicLethargy on Oct 16, 2009

    I’m curious about what’s in the box too. They tried to tell me, but they gave up after a while and just told me that it was important.

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 16, 2009

    What a wonderful write! You certainly have a way with words drawing the reader in.I wanted to keep reading and reading.I also really want to know what is in the box!lol perhaps some kind of meteorite.lol not sure I am not the writer of this fantastic story. I also liked how you did this in sections,very creative!

  • wonder on Oct 16, 2009

    A very creative article,arousing great interest.

  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Oct 17, 2009

    Very captivating. I too want to know what was in the box.

    This is an interesting sketch on the way a life does not seem to match expectations yet is fulfilling and ultimately yields something wonderful in the end.

  • Teves on Oct 17, 2009

    Nice one…

  • Jamie Myles on Jan 31, 2010

    Excellent! Now I’m left wondering what was in the box. Well done.

  • Wiggles18 on Feb 4, 2010

    Nice story. I like stories that make you think, the way this one does.

  • Netty net on Jul 18, 2010

    I like to know what the little boy discovered, You say its important. what was important about it. and what dose it mean to them six years later.

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