When a man’s life is destroyed, he seeks revenge even if he’s got to go through hell.
It was a cold, rainy evening when the soldiers came. They came in with brute force breaking everything in their way. They killed my family, destoried my home, and left me with this hole. My name is John O’brian and I’ve been wondering around this earth for about 10 years lonely, scared, and waiting for them to come for me. Thats when he came from the fire within me, the roaring hate filled with pain and agony.
I first took notice of him in a wheat feild one night starring at me with those dark red glowing eyes. It was as if he was inside my head trying to tell me something. I could sense the evil in him and it lured me to him. I began walking towards the eyes but they vanished in the dark. Even know I didn’t see him I could feel him breathing down the back of my neck.
Next morning about 3:33 a.m. I heard pounding at my door and a machine voice saying let us in or we’ll break it down. I exscaped out the window in my room while they raided the place, but one of them seen me out the window, and shot me in the back redering me helpless. I slowly made my way to the grave yard a block away, and layed on my fathers grave. Then suddenly a loud sceeching sound woke me up. I looked up into the darkness and seen bleeding eyes pouring blood all over me, healing my wound. I turned away and heard a voice say “come in its time”
Soon I could understand him as if he was apart of me but I knew who he really was. I called upon him on that cold, rainy evening when the soldiers came, I went against everything I was taught about god, I turned to the devil for revenge for my family because if god cared why would he leave me alone in this world with this hole inside me. If god don’t care I don’t care.
After that day something broke in me. I became a demon and the haunting
eyes were my masters. Who I will soon meet when the transfermation is fully complete. I can already see his full body. When that day comes I will finally be ready for my revenge against this mechanical army who is taking over the world.
Satans already showed me the future. I will kill those who killed my family but I will have to become part of his army. He needs my special abilities to take over the earth, if I should refuse I will be killed, and takin to hell nailed to a cross carried by demons.
Well, in the end I chose my path, the one satan knew I would choose. I killed the soldiers and went against satans command . I could not join the army that killed my family, ruined my life, destoried the world, and sent me to hell. I was going to hell anyways and i’m not one of satans little lap dogs. I won’t be pushed down, shoved down.
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