This is the Prologue to my friend’s Book-Bloody Crowns.
Yes,I did get approval.

Alone, she sat there, in a corner holding onto her knife as if all hope was gone. Quiet sobs break the silence of the dark room. She couldn’t take life anymore; everything she had no longer existed. She no longer has anyone to hold onto. Her broken life couldn’t be fixed. She waited, wondering if anyone cared enough about her, to help her, to rescue her, to save her life; what seemed to be decades of time, were only minutes; still no one came. 1

“Not every princess becomes a queen right,” she thought to herself. “It’s time,” she whispered as the clock stroked midnight. And with the knife she held hopelessly, she ended her shameful life.

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  • Avaxier on Jul 20, 2010

    This sounds like an interesting dark fantasy story. I hope you\’ll be posting the full version here.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 21, 2010

    it can be an interesting story.

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