I have decided to start writing about the life of average people with average jobs.
In this short story I write 400 words in the night of a cab driver.

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I start my shift at 7pm My cab is clean and ready to go.

My first fare is a young woman. She is dressed for the night.

I take her to her destination, a nice luxury condo downtown.

She hesitates when I pull up to let her out.

“Are you ok Miss?” I ask her.

“Yes, I’m just not sure I want to be here.” She replies.

“Would you like me to take you somewhere else?” I ask.

Hesitating again, she replies, “No, thank you.” pays me and gets out of my cab.

Although I wonder if she will be all right, my job is done.

On to the next fare.

I drive around my route for 12 minutes before I find my next fare.

This guy is all business. Heading off to a meeting, talking on his Blackberry the whole ride.

I let him out and I’m off again.

It’s 12am. I have been on shift for 5 hours. It has been a long quiet night. Not much happens on a Tuesday night.

I get a radio call for my next fare. I am on my way back to the luxury condo I let the young lady out at.

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I stay in front of the building for 2 minutes before she walks up to my cab opening the door and taking her place in the back seat.

“Evening Miss.” I say to her, “Where to?”

“146 Dumount Rd.” she replies.

“Did you have a nice evening?” I ask her.

No response. She doesn’t want to talk.

We drive for two blocks when suddenly she says, “No, I didn’t. I found out tonight that my boyfriend of 3 years doesn’t want to see me anymore.”

She begins to cry.

“I’m sorry Miss.” I say and continue driving.

We arrive at her destination.

“$14.42 please” I say to her, pointing to the meter.

She hands me a twenty and says, “Keep the change.”

“Thank you Miss.” I say, giving her a smile.

“Good night.” She whispers.

I never see the young woman again. I often wonder how she is and what has become of her.

People come and people go. That is the role of a cab driver, taking the fare to their destination. Some we make a connection with, others there is none but once in a while there is one that touches your heart never to be seen again.

© Copyright Nina Munroe Mason. 03/06/11

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Comments (10)
  • Heloni Lynn on Mar 6, 2011

    Thank you for your interesting share

  • atta muhammad on Mar 6, 2011

    nice post i like this share very much

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 6, 2011

    great read

  • N. Sun on Mar 6, 2011

    Very touching…I hope the young woman got over it.

  • Larry Fish on Mar 6, 2011

    Excellent writing, this is definitely one of your best.

  • djbtol on Mar 6, 2011

    Interesting

  • Nina Mason on Mar 6, 2011

    Thank you all very much.

  • Nina Mason on Mar 6, 2011

    Thank you Larry! You have inspired me to find a new way of writing. This is what I have been looking for in my work.

  • alexgadd on Mar 6, 2011

    Very interesting poem, thank you for sharing

  • Nina Mason on Mar 11, 2011

    Thank you Alex.

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